The Steam Age of 1886

It completely copies the setting and theme of Lord of Mysteries, but slightly changes the plot. Even the characters are almost the same, but the writing is much worse.

Having read less than 100 chapters, I would give it a 5.5 Out of 10. There are indeed references in the plot, but it also has its own unique world view and culture. Chinese documents and explanations of gods are also quite distinctive. Generally speaking, I can rate a plot like this above 7 points without major flaws. What I can't accept is actually the problem with the author's writing style. Readers who don't require an immersive experience may be okay, but those who have a little bit of reading requirements can feel that the author's "urgency" in coding leads to serious mechanization of the narrative, overly tense paragraphs, and so on. I believe that the author's writing style will gradually improve, but I must also tell the author that human inspiration is actually limited, and each paragraph of each book must be meticulous to produce a masterpiece.

It's all Le Le Le Le. Doesn't the author know how to write it?

The writing is beautiful, but there are a lot of typos!

The plot is confusing and bland

The first is that there are too many similarities, and the second is that the deception is clearly about cultivating immortality.