At the Beginning of the Mother's Womb, She Turned Her Mother into a Fairy

I was so angry that I was just watching and gave me the immediate ending. I have never seen such an outrageous ending. I am still waiting for the update. One chapter gave me the ending. At the very least, there are hundreds of holes that have not been filled in, and I am in a hurry to fill them in. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, crazy!

I wrote it wrong, and it turned out to be a mess later.

The ending sucked, I was speechless, so I just finished it because I was so excited to watch it?

Written in a mess

The writing is young, the conception is immature, the plot is absurd, and the logic is not rigorous enough.

Looking at the previous article of the book title, the male protagonist gave a reward to the female protagonist's mother to wish her to become an immortal, and the male protagonist embarked on the road of cultivating immortality. I originally wanted to see the male protagonist encounter a big bully and a weak opponent on the road to immortality, and his mother made a high-profile appearance to help him clear the obstacles. Unexpectedly, the female protagonist was written as an ordinary person who does not know that she has become an immortal! The male protagonist is invincible all the way without any brains! We didn't encounter any danger! Plain and simple! East and west! Keep writing about locks! Whether the heroine can become an immortal or not is a reason for the male protagonist to practice immortality again! He just mindlessly hid it and nothing more happened!

Another eunuch book

The donkey's lips are not the horse's mouth, and the writing is gibberish