Primordial World: I, King Zhou, Lay Low Until I Became Invincible

After a little review, I saw about a hundred chapters and gave up the book. First of all, the plot is okay. It writes about the counterattack of King Zhou of Shang and specializes in stealing treasures through the system. It can barely be said that the writing is so-so. But in terms of logic, let's focus on it. There are problems. Big problems. First, it is In the mortal realm of King Zhou, he can actually use the earth escape technique to hide from saints, as well as great powers such as Tai Yi and Zhao Gongming. Moreover, the system does not protect the protagonist, but only has a formation that isolates spiritual thoughts. I want to ask, can the formation used by mortals hide so many big bosses? If you insist that the system gives you invincibility, that's fine. However, the article clearly states that you can see it, but you can't observe it with your spiritual mind. How long can you, a mortal, be able to escape from the earth? Yang Jian is at least an immortal, right? The celestial eye can't see you? Saint Nuwa can't see you? As a result, they couldn't see so deep, the place was too big. They wouldn't look this far? Are you kidding Ancestor Hongjun? Also, regarding the realm setting, I remember it was described in the early stage. The refining of Qi is divided into human flower, earth flower, and smallpox. Isn't that the early, middle and late stages of refining Qi? Are you going to come up with the early stage of personal flowering, the middle period of human flowering, the late period of human flowering, and the peak period of human flowering? That is the pre-pre-peak period, the pre-middle period, the pre-late period, the pre-peak period, the middle-early period, the middle-middle period, the middle-late period, the middle-peak period, the post-pre-period, the post-middle period, the post-late period, the post-peak period, and then will there be a pre-peak period, a middle peak period, a late peak period, and a peak period? Are you afraid that you are going crazy? How about practicing Qi to transform into a spirit? Is it the same? There are also returning to the void and joining the Tao, and then immortality. I read a comment from a Taoist friend who said that the realms of this article are human flowers, earth flowers, sky flowers, and immortals. . . Of course, I didn't read it later, but it was inconsistent with the early realm setting. The author set up his own refining of qi, refining qi to transform into spirit, refining spirit to reverse emptiness, and refining emptiness to combine with Tao. There are four realms for mortals, and they don't match those who live in the world. This can be forgotten, because it can also be said that this is a matter of the author's realm setting. Any author can set whatever he wants for his book, that's fine. Let's talk about the rhythm, more than a hundred chapters. The progress is about 27%, and the protagonist has only refined the Qi in the mid- to mid-stage, and this is a pill that the system rewards for decades of skill. After decades of refining the Qi in the mid-to-mid stage, there will be the middle to late stages, and the mid-to-peak stage can break through to the late and early stages. Is this slowing down the pace, or do we have to admit that the realm setting is wrong? If it is really like what the fellow Taoist said in the comment, after the human beings become immortals, it is still reasonable, but the previous settings need to be changed, and the content of several pictures needs to be changed, and it is a major change, a magic change, so I will give you points for hard work. Generally speaking, if you can give it a score, it would be 6.5.

What a pity, eunuch!

The Human Emperor actually has no luck to protect his body. What the hell?

Too bad,,,,

Average, I haven't read Chapter 100

There are too many pitfalls that have not been filled in. It's basically a eunuch.