Rise of Empire Starts with Building a Steel Dynasty

The novel is well written, the plot is exciting, and the writing is brilliant.

The prince's competitors are not only the male protagonist, but also several princes, but the prince only targets the endless designs for the male protagonist. Does the prince know that the male protagonist is bringing high-tech time travel to subvert him? The male protagonist has just developed gunpowder and handed it over to the court in exchange for temporary pressure from the Huns. Is he seeking death? Wouldn't it be wonderful if some ingenuity was used to solve the problem? Just relying on the profits of soap and soap, a great city can be developed and accommodate hundreds of thousands of disaster victims. What do you think, author? Are readers brainless? Although the novel is fictional, it cannot be unreasonable and illogical, right? Even this is okay, but the male protagonist seems to be strategizing and full of strategies in many main lines, but at first glance, it is full of loopholes. You force the opponent's intelligence, but don't use the reader's IQ to crush it. In addition, the plot has no priority and does not understand the priorities. Such novels only follow the author's thinking and conjure it up in the author's own mind, which can destroy the reader's IQ.

After reading it for so long, there are almost no typos, the writing is good, the logic is clear, and the outlook is normal. It's also one of the top three among the similar articles I've read.

The system plays an important role in the article, but I forgot about it as I read it. Big support for the author! ! !

Overall, it's average. There's nothing about the protagonist's halo or system. After reading it, I felt that the whole story was more about narrating the protagonist's development process from a third party's perspective. With the addition of super-technical weapons, the plot was basically very average and gentle. It was about fighting, winning, fighting, and so on, and then the finale. There is very little writing on the harem, and no ink is wasted on describing it. The main content is about an original wife and a female general. Secondly, the ending is a bit sloppy, with the direct conclusion of Ten Thousand Kingdoms Coming to Korea. Although there is nothing to write about, and I will have to fight aliens if I continue writing, hahaha, but I can actually write about meeting Westerners, finding that their weapon technology tree is 50-50 different from my own, and then pulling back and forth. The plot is really boring now. However, the overall outline is still very clear. I am a person who listens to books. If I read them, it would be a bit difficult to persist. Overall, I give a neutral rating.

Don't look at it, it lowers your IQ.

Well enough

I can only say so-so! The plot advances too quickly and there are too few dialogues. It is basically explained by a third party. It cannot attract readers and can only be accepted by those who listen to the book.

It's boring, I can't stand it.

I've handed over all the gunpowder. Let's take a look.