After Becoming the Villainous Immortal Venerable, My Unhinged Disciple Insists on Making Me His Furnace

It's very interesting. I want to watch Nian Xi's extra story. The male and female protagonists have a lot of experiences. They are a couple in their past and present lives. The male protagonist loves the female protagonist very much and will never leave her. The system is an artifact used by the parents of the heroine in the upper world to guide her. Lu Feng and Lan Xin'er fell in love in the upper world in their first life, and Lan Xin'er was killed by Yun Yan. Lu Feng accompanied Lan Xin'er in reincarnation (without memory). For Lan Xin'er's safety, the heroine's parents first sent Lan Xin'er to hide in the modern world, and then returned to the world of cultivation. Later, before getting married, she met someone from the upper realm sent by Yun Yan, and Lan Xin'er was killed for the second time. Lu Feng accompanied Lan Xin'er to the mortal world for the second time in reincarnation. Lu Feng had memories but Lan Xin'er didn't. He recovered the memories of the modern world and the world of cultivation in the secret realm, and recovered the memories of the upper world before ascending. After ascending back to the upper world, he spent his life as an ordinary person in the illusion of the secret realm, and then captured Yun.

Emmm I thought it was quite interesting in the early stage, but later on the heroine was too easily manipulated and I didn't like this character very much.

The heroine makes people feel very humble, and makes people feel irritable and aggrieved. It makes the heroine look very weak. After all, she is a powerful cultivator, and she follows the male protagonist in everything. It's really cool😑

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The setting of this book is particularly similar to another book of the same type, as if it is a copy of that one. I won't mention the title of the book, but if you are lucky enough, you will get the one with a rating of 9.7. I don't know the full story, so I can't comment. I've read this book in its entirety, so I'm commenting seriously. I adhered to the mentality of never abandoning the article when I started reading it, gritted my teeth and finished reading it. The author's early interactions between the male and female protagonists were all about kissing, kissing, kissing, kissing, kissing, kissing, can I kiss you... And nothing else. The female protagonist is portrayed as a terminally ill love brain patient who only thinks about the male protagonist during life and death. Will the male protagonist go crazy if she thinks about her death? But other people around him are also fighting to save the heroine! But she only thought about whether the male protagonist would be sad?! The character of the heroine in the back is even more unbearable. She has a whole character of a love-minded wife, who is obedient, sensible and cares for the male protagonist until the end. The male protagonist is also very sick and treats the female protagonist as his own, and every move must be in his sight. The subsequent plots became more and more bland, like writing an outline. There was no content in the description. I guess I didn't dare to copy it too much, but I had no content myself, so I could only write it blindly. Below are some bugs I recorded. Bug ① When the male protagonist first became a direct disciple, why did he deliberately expose his identity as a demon cultivator, "deliberately" let Han Li see it, and make it known to everyone? In fact, this was the trigger for the heroine to be discovered and killed by the two men in the upper world! Bug②The growth trend of favorability. The article states that the male and female protagonists have lived in the mortal world for more than ten years. It was not until they got married that their favorability score increased by 10 points perfunctorily... The two of them got along so intimately that their favorability score did not increase? And at the beginning, the male protagonist's favorability rose rapidly! Later, the male protagonist regarded the female protagonist as his forbidden love. At first glance, the favorability score was only 75? Is this reasonable? Bug③Starting the game with the female protagonist in the Mahayana stage, but she is afraid that the male protagonist in the Golden Elixir stage will kill her? Is this reasonable? If Mahayana could be killed by golden elixir, wouldn't the world be in chaos? The book I mentioned at the beginning, which is very similar to this one, has a clear setting on this point. In that book, the female protagonist has a seal inside her body, and her actual cultivation level is suppressed at the golden elixir stage, so she is afraid of the male protagonist and is "forced" to follow him, but this book does not even have a reasonable explanation! Regardless of the fact that this book is a copycat of another book of the same type, the interaction between the male and female protagonists is also uninteresting. It feels very bland. Even though the article says that the two of them kiss and practice each other at every turn, it is very dry. Maybe the author's writing power cannot support it.

Lan Xin'er was a patient with a heart disease in her previous life, and she was lucky enough to travel through time and become his master in this life, but what she didn't know was that these were just a plan by her childish mother. She is the number one female cultivator, a being that everyone admires, and calls herself the "original deity". She is the only female cultivator who can do this! When he first arrived, he was being attracted by her... She originally wanted to let him go and walk away, but was threatened by a certain system and had to accept him as a disciple. This was what his lovely mother in the upper world did. The purpose was, of course, to promote the sublimation of their relationship. Every time they were in danger, every time they shared weal and woe, their good feelings continued to escalate, and she realized that he seemed to have fallen in love with her. But she didn't quite believe it, because she knew... He is Young Master Feng in the upper realm. Because of the death of his sweetheart, he is willing to accompany her into reincarnation, and he loses his memory. Because he was reborn unexpectedly in his last life, he never expected that she would be taken away! Under her unexpected teasing, I slowly fell in. Everything was back on track, but just before their wedding, she was killed by a villain and was about to enter reincarnation again. He was willing to accompany her... What is love? It was he who accompanied her into reincarnation twice despite losing his memory. It was she who maintained his dignity in front of them and protected her husband domineeringly... This book is really good. Starlight does not care about travelers, and time pays off to those who care about it~ Just like their love, no matter how many times it is repeated, it remains unwavering.

Heroine. . . Weak women love to be shocked, so forget it if they are not worthy of their cultivation. . Emmm Anyway, I took a peek at a good-looking man, and he looked shy when he was discovered. . . . . 6 I don't know what to say, I gave up, the subject matter is quite good.

Nice

The heroine is so humble that she becomes shy when she sees a good-looking man. The description of the male protagonist is pretty good, but has the author forgotten about the other characters and left them with no characteristics? I feel like I'm scribbling in some places, making me feel dizzy.

It's so pretty. The author's writing style is really good~~