Online Game: Immortal Demonic Body

I was completely speechless. What a mess. It can only be said to be based on the defense.

Many things are vague, forget about the writing. Even if you can play like this after rebirth, you must be drunk.

Hidden profession at the beginning, god-level talent, entered the game earlier than others, reborn with hundreds of years of gaming experience, the whole start is a cool article, but in the end, more than 80 chapters, he can't even defeat 5 opponents and needs help from others. If the author can't write a cool article, don't write it, it's a waste of my time

There are also online games, cool articles, and the return of the strong. If you don't know how to write, let's see what others write! You! …Why!

Nothing

Even if you are afraid of death despite infinite rebirths, stop playing and go to sleep.

It was fine in the beginning, but the plot suddenly jumped around chapter 40. I didn't know what was going on, and I didn't recognize anyone. The author only posts it but doesn't read it, right?

Wrong chapter

These are two books, right? Don't you have any inspiration to write them later?