I Am Black Heart Lotus in Quick Transmission

If you're not the author, don't you even read the article after you finish writing it? It's okay to have a lot of typos, the sentences are also messy, and several paragraphs are written with inconsistencies that make you confused, make no sense, and are very intellectually depressing. Didn't you even read it after you finished writing? And if you write an article, just write an article. It's okay to deliberately smear the characters in the TV series. You just complain, but you don't have to do the task. It's superfluous. The writing is immature, but you can still read it, but there are more and more illogical logics in the back. The preface doesn't match and the follow-up is incomprehensible. You look confused, and the sentences are repeated many times. The second small world is easy to reduce your intelligence.

Well, the first few chapters are still readable, but the names at the back are also wrong, the sentences are not fluent, the story is incoherent, and it is a mess. You have written hundreds of chapters and you have typos in the names. I can still understand it. These dozens of chapters are just like this. I didn't even review it after I wrote it.

I am lazy in Chinese, but my words are beautiful!

I don't like the cowardice of the female protagonist, there is no male protagonist, and the plot is very confusing! ! ! Bad review! ! ! Lots of typos! ! !

▪ The plot is very confusing. Some parts are illogical and difficult to understand. Some plane pits ended before being filled in. In some parts, I even have no idea what the author wants to express. ▪ The writing style is average, there are no memorable or beautiful sentences, and the words and sentences are average. ▪ The heroine has a very good personality? ? ? It's confusing (bushi), but I don't really like it anyway ▪ All in all, bad review 🙂

The main reason is that too many typos seriously affect the reading experience. It also requires readers to recall the previous plot to guess the meaning of the paragraph with typos. This is too difficult for a lazy person like me.

The writing is really not good, the plot is just like a running account, and there are a lot of typos. They are not all broken individually, but piles of them are very confusing. Just... Practice again😥

The plot is okay, but the sentences are messy and the writing is not good.

There are a lot of typos, and it feels like there is a deliberate effort to discredit the characters in the TV series. Strong women are strong women. Why does it feel like a vicious female supporting role?

There are a lot of typos, the sentences don't make sense, and the writing is very poor! ! !