Are You Crazy? the Cool School Beauty Came to Pick Me up at the School Gate.

I have read it all. To sum up, I feel that the plot is very good and the characters are okay. The protagonist only loves one person wholeheartedly. The first and middle stages of the novel are well written, but the ending is a bit fast and a bit vague. However, I still recommend everyone to read this novel. Looking forward to the continuation of this book

The author wrote the story well and the plot was vivid, but the ending was too hasty. The final result and relationship between Tongtian Cult Master and Cihang Taoist (that is, whether they are the same person as Zhang Xuan and Xia Meng) were not explained, and what happened to the system in the end was not explained. South China Sea Purple Bamboo Forest and Wudao Cliff don't have a final summary? What is the relationship between the two? What's going on with Zhang Xuan's parents? Although I know that Zhang Ping and Zheng Shaoli are his biological parents, the author at least mentions it clearly. It seems a bit inappropriate that Ultraman Tiga didn't explain his identity at the end. What happened to Mr. Wei and Xia Qing in the end? Zhang Xuan and Xia Meng's college alumni were not mentioned in the end. There are simply too many people and things that I have not thanked at the end. I am not responsible for the book I wrote at all, and I did not write seriously afterward. I also want to see the beautiful life of Xia Meng and Zhang Xuan after they got together, and what does the author mean by a real person? How did he become a real person? The author is too big-hearted and does not write anything. I am really reading this book very seriously. I like this book very much, but the ending is a bit rushed. I hope the author can see it. 😁😁 (Purely personal opinion, no malicious intent)

Not bad, very nice, but it's a pity that it's so bad

It would be great if it didn't include cultivating immortality, but suddenly adding cultivating immortality would be unsightly. A good relationship turns into cultivating immortality, which is seriously inconsistent with the title of the book. It is only there in the first few dozen chapters, but it changes later on.

I hate that good students are going to become immortals after practicing two kinds of martial arts, and all the monsters have come out. . .

Looking at the whole book, many places are written in a hurry and a bit stiff, and the male protagonist is a bit stupid, and the rest of the book is unfinished. The sudden transition from campus love to cultivating immortality is a bit abrupt, but overall it's okay.

I can't see the protagonist being so humble. Why is he always doting on a girl? He grabs you and pinches you at every turn. People don't even know you know martial arts, so they beat you with martial arts. After you defended yourself, you felt guilty. It made me really upset.

The first half is okay, but after reading the second half, I almost gave up on reading. I don't care if I am in the city and am cultivating immortals. I won't save my girlfriend when she is kidnapped. I am really convinced.

The plot is so disgusting! What is the heroine? ! The male protagonist is a holy mother! ! The three views inside are directly incorrect! ! !

The writing is so bad. The protagonist, the Holy Mother, has incorrect views on things.