I'm the Eldest Sister of the Family, and I Spoil My Five Younger Brothers

Very good looking. It would be better if it is updated soon. Confession Qi Sheng. At first I thought he was a relatively cold person, but I didn't expect that the more I watched, the more I looked at him. Come on, who would reject a funny man who is loyal and can make money? Besides, every time I see Zhao Bozhi and the others criticizing him, he looks pitiful and mute, eating Coptis chinensis and suffering indescribably. I really want to laugh ahahaha🤣

Typos, too many words, or too few words make the sentence unclear Careless writing of names and pronouns. Please be careful if you are not good at Chinese.

The article is very good, the heroine has her own space, the eldest sister protects her younger brothers and avenges her mother. The male lead is also very good.

To be honest, the article is quite well-written, but there are too many typos. Of course, even with typos, I can understand it. The problem is that some sentences cannot be read clearly at all, and I can't even guess what they mean! Give us a good review to encourage you! I hope I will be more rigorous when writing my book^ω^

The writing style is indeed quite young, the comments are correct, and there are many typos, but these are not problems. The main reason is that the words are wrong and inconsistent. I don't remember the articles I wrote. I am convinced. I write casually, right? I write changes while I am doing it. There is no outline. I just write what I want, right? I just started writing eight hundred articles for one tael of silver, and later it was convenient for me to write a thousand articles. From the tenth chapter, there is a problem, sometimes milk, sometimes goat milk. Also, the author is very similar to the author of the previous overbearing president Qi Pa. I don't know if she has written anything else. I've seen Qi Pa before, where the CEO charged the heroine several million for a meal card for a week, and then she ran out of food. We don't know. What to eat? The author wrote that the supplies for a hundred large trucks cost tens of billions. We don't know if this is guns and ammunition, or if she has never seen money. How many rockets can be bought with tens of billions? You can watch Mao Buyi's interview and buy two rockets. Writing something like 2 billion rice, I suspect she never goes to the supermarket. Even if you order from Meituan Takeaway Supermarket, you can see the price of rice. If you pay more attention to some people's names, you will find that they are a bit confusing, so I will always change them.

The emperor likes the heroine, but the empress does not like this heroine. But the imperial concubine likes the heroine. Although the heroine is the emperor's adopted daughter. When will the hero and heroine get married? The heroine is too happy. Because the heroine has 5 younger brothers. That's why he is happy. The hero also dotes on him. The food cooked by the heroine is so delicious. So many people like his cooking.

I really can't stand it anymore. Grandpa, grandma, uncle and the whole family in the old house are really invincible and weird. They can stay in the same village again and again even if they risk their lives every day. I can't stand it.

The storyline is addictive and the writing is smooth. It would be nice to have more updates.

The logic is confusing and the article is full of typos. Who can read it without being confused?

The writing is too careless, inconsistent, inconsistent, and has many typos. The storyline is okay.