Endless Evolution in the Apocalypse

I think it's okay. It's been several days. Why is there no one there?

Overall, it's good, but there are some typos and the sentence can't be connected to the next paragraph halfway through. I hope the author can improve it.

The first few chapters are foreshadowing and seem rather confusing. You can only understand the cause and effect after reading Chapter 4 or Chapter 6. In fact, the writing is quite good. I have only read ten chapters, but based on my experience in reading novels, this book can be read.

Please, Xueling should have more scenes, and the author please add more scenes faster.

The ending feels unfinished. Do you want to write a sequel?

It is difficult for the editor to write such a saintly killer. 🤪After all, there are so many words, and he might die from poison.

Overall rating: garbage I haven't read much, and that's why I abandoned the article because I haven't read much, and there are too many poisonous points. I won't talk too much about it, but just talk about a few poisonous points within 70 chapters. If you can accept it, just read it. Poison point 1: At the beginning, someone arranged for a killer to chase the protagonist, and the protagonist fought back to kill him. He guessed that someone was secretly trying to deal with his father. The father knew nothing about it, but the protagonist just didn't tell his father that someone was trying to kill him. The reason is that he is afraid that his father will be worried, and he does not want to disrupt his father's operations in the base. Of course, of course, he was seriously injured by other base leaders, the base was torn apart by the rebels, and his father died in the end🙃 Poison point 2: In order to save a man and his sister, he made a bet with the son of the base handler. The protagonist believed that the man would be very successful in the future, so he saved him and wasted time, energy and treasure to train him. The man didn't say anything about repaying his kindness, and he also misunderstood that the protagonist liked his sister and treated the protagonist. Secretly hating and distrusting, I misunderstood that the protagonist slept with his sister, and had murderous intentions towards the protagonist. In the end, the protagonist explained to him and the man was relieved. I thought that this person was going to be useful to the protagonist, but in the end, he neither awakened nor helped the protagonist. The protagonist has always been the protagonist, and of course he was killed by zombies in the end. Poisonous Point 3: After his father died, he was protected from the shelter and brought a bottle of oil. Who was this bottle of oil? Of course it was the sister of the man above. The soles of his feet would ulcerate and die after walking a few steps. Of course, the male protagonist would also protect the bottle of oil to other shelters tens of thousands of miles away. Don't you want to continue watching such a saintly male protagonist? Don't want to? Goose, Holy Mother, Idiot, everyone, hurry up and take a look at such a charming male protagonist, and no one will say a word. (Finally, let me make it clear that this only represents my own opinion. If you disagree, you are right. I am a reader and he is the author. If the book is not good and I cannot express my opinion, then there is no need to earn money to write the book.) I haven't watched much of it, but if it's good later on, just pretend I didn't say it. There are too many poisonous points and I can't stand it until I complain.

It's nice to read, but the author's message and the unfinished story are a bit annoying. I hope the author will stop leaving your comments and unfinished comments in subsequent articles, okay?

The issue of levels is too confusing. The level of passers-by is B level in one chapter and C level in the next. Just to show off for the protagonist, it can't be too outrageous. I just wrote it and then forgot about it in the next chapter? ?

Rambling! I can't find the direction of the main text, and a bunch of narrations are talking about women! The protagonist also loses the watermelon and picks up the sesame seeds with a bunch of mindless operations, similar to a large-scale running diary.