I Become Stronger When I Bump into Ghosts

Let's just say that the first part of this novel is still readable, but the rest of it is not that good. After the protagonist, an orphan, gets the system, the reward given by the system is unclear. Later, the reward of the system is ignored. Moreover, the supernatural level is written unclearly. More importantly, the protagonist is too carefree and treats every woman well. I can't stand it anymore. For the main content, I can write dozens of chapters in one chapter. I vomit and give up.

It's very confusing. In order to make up for the word count, I write a lot of nonsense. Things that can be explained clearly in two or three sentences. Che Zululu talks about two or three chapters. The more I read, the more annoying it becomes.

The writing is good and the plot is compact, at least because it should be, 8.5 Points

Nothing much to say, just normal life. Praise to the author.

It's just that it's a bit repetitive later on.

The protagonist's IQ is much lower than his peers

Good themes have been written down, and the system's capabilities are unclear. The protagonist has just begun to understand the importance of strength. After encountering a strong enemy and being beaten, he only talks about getting stronger while picking up girls. He does not practice, and he does not look for martial arts secrets even if he has money. In order to reduce the number of words, the author talks a lot of nonsense. He can explain it in three or two sentences, but he insists on three or four chapters of nonsense.

The plot is very good

Is this a romance novel? There are too few ghosts. The main point of the movie is obviously to encounter ghosts, but it has to write about the love between children and ramble on. If it weren't for the fact that your writing was relatively smooth, I wouldn't have been able to give you this praise.

Nice