Mrs. Lu's Vest Fell Off Again

This ends well! ! I like! !

Let me start by saying, I haven't finished reading it. I only saw 118, and then I looked at 191. Why is it average: 1. Typos and missing words (I haven't skipped more than a hundred words in the past, and almost every chapter has typos and missing words. It feels like you can find almost 200 typos in an 800-word essay) 2. The plot is relatively slow. The heroine comes back after rebirth. She wants revenge. The only targets of her revenge are her sister, that scumbag, and her adoptive parents, who directly and indirectly caused her tragedy in her previous life. That's about it. Li Fei'er doesn't count and has few scenes. She came back after rebirth. It was quite enjoyable at first, but they tampered with her clothes and she fought back. She lost her vest and was sent directly to the hero's house. The heroine's early stage. . The reflex arc and coaxing techniques are quite unique. She didn't know what the male protagonist was afraid of. Afterwards, she was stunned for a moment when she heard the scumbag's voice. The male protagonist was unhappy and stopped talking. She felt it was baffling and didn't say anything. Later, I forgot how to coax people, but in the early stage, the eldest sister coaxed people to cry. She cried in grievance, and then the male protagonist couldn't stand it anymore and felt distressed. In the early stage, the two of them were really speechless. The male protagonist was very controlling and didn't like the female protagonist to be with other men. One time, the female protagonist had a meal with her partner and didn't report it, which made him look at her. He was angry and she was crying. Then again, I think you want to slap me in the face, you are a scumbag, you already have a vest and a backer, if we can't do it, I will ask for removal. I will not stay in this house anymore. I will give you the money to support me. We have nothing to do with each other. After that, I should be famous, it is time to lose my horse, it is time to find a job, it is time to get married, this sister. . She couldn't bear it, so could she understand why Mao could write more than 200 chapters? I also think the heroine is a little bit off sometimes. . . Silly, you asked your best friend to take your resume, but your best friend went to the bathroom and didn't take her bag. After that, you asked the two to tear up the resume. Let's say, if she hadn't been the protagonist and she was really capable, if the director didn't help to speak, she would have been a bit embarrassed to dictate the resume. And her blueprints were stolen in her previous life, you. . Just really. . Why don't you change the password? Don't you change the password that can be guessed by a discerning person? Let her sister take the picture. From the beginning to the end, I think I have to write five or six chapters. I thought the heroine would give her a lesson and let her steal a picture designed by a celebrity that is not obvious, so that others can't see it at a glance. Just distinguish it carefully. Play with her. She relies on restoring surveillance. Summary: These are my personal opinions without having finished reading, but her sister is really good at jumping, and she didn't enter until almost 200 chapters. Boredom passing the time. . . It should be okay. .

There are just a lot of typos

Nice

Many typos and missing words

It looks good, and lovers will eventually get married!