My Senior Sister Is Super Protective of Shortcomings

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Ling for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Longyang for 1,000 years, White Snake has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Yushu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day of a certain year, a woman was lying weakly on the bed, her face was pale, her mouth was trembling slightly, tears glistened at the corners of her eyes, and she murmured in a hoarse voice: "Don't forget to update..."

It looks good from the front, but not from the back.

It looks good. Updates are too slow.

It doesn't look good, the key points are not written, there are too many things, it is ugly, and it also talks about a master, the killer came and carried him out, the protagonist came back and saw it, and the killer threw the master to the ground before he woke up. I asked the author what you think, and there are so many trivial things.

The protagonist is not decisive in his killing. The Holy Mother, others wanted to kill him but let them go twice in a row. Only one of the seven engagements was clearly stated. He went down the mountain for revenge. Studying in school was just a cover, but he wrote so many scenes about studying. He didn't focus on the case he investigated back then.

I can't explain it in a thousand words, but I can express it in one word. This word is just beautiful, and you can't put it down once you see it.

It looks great.

What are you writing about? . . . Messy

Very nice

Update quickly, why is it so slow? What do you mean, author?