Da Xia Zi

Not bad, less women

That is. Not the full version

The YY life of a common man

I was attracted by the setting of this book, but the first feeling I got from this book was that there was something wrong with the male protagonist's character. As a protagonist who has just traveled through modern times, this character is definitely... It made me unable to look at him directly from his perspective. The various s-words he wrote did not include the plot. The first ten or so chapters felt like the pace was too fast and a bit chaotic. It seemed that a lot of necessary things were skipped, and a plot that could be written for up to twenty or thirty chapters was crammed into more than ten chapters. At this point, I gave up the book and gave a medium score to encourage the author.

Why don't you write and play?

It is true that the author has a superb imagination, and readers can learn that success is full of difficulties.

The intrigue is vividly written, but although the subject matter written by Immortal is novel, it feels very bland, and the erotic aspect is violent and disgusting.

Too little, updates too slowly, and tastes bad

There is no reason for the emperor to be threatened by the prime minister at all times. This fabrication is too deviant. After reading a few chapters, I really can't stand it anymore, but my appreciation level is not good enough!

The more I write, the more I deviate from the original intention, and the more I write, the more out of tune I become! It was supposed to be a good time-travel novel, but in the end, the author gradually made it up! According to the gradual expansion of the story and the random writing, it will not be finished in three to five years! Here I would like to advise the author to stop writing (or finish it early) and to devote all his energy to writing a wonderful masterpiece again and dedicating it to everyone! ! !