Xuanhuan: I’m the Chosen Villain

When I first came across this book, I thought the writing was good and there was something I could learn from. Although it is also a systematic novel, the protagonist is not a mindless upgrade or a slap in the face. The protagonist also has an IQ. Unlike the protagonists in other novels who can't move when they see a woman, the protagonist will accept any good-looking one. In this book, only from the perspective of the villain can we discover that the protagonists of those ordinary brainless novels really have nothing but good luck (so in the future, if there is a son of luck who has a lot of luck and is very clever, he will have to give Lu Shengzi a little trouble). As for the plot, it's okay at the beginning. The general luck child comes out to harvest wool for the protagonist (the luck value determines the number of chapters that appear (`ω´), for example, the previous one who only had a thousand luck values ​​did not survive half a chapter). I hope it can be improved slowly in the future, and there is no need to rush to update. Ensuring quality is the most important thing, and you can also learn from other authors. You can write down the holes you dug in a notebook, and then fill them in in the next few chapters, or dozens, or hundreds of chapters (it doesn't matter when you fill them in, I hope you can fill them in foreshadowing that will have a long-lasting impact, and then there are holes that must be filled, don't let some people disappear after writing them ᙏ̤̫) As for the characters, I think Lu Shengzi's character design is okay (with such powerful parents, it's normal to be able to leapfrog challenges), and he won't be unable to walk when he sees a woman, and he will be full of thoughts of "exploiting employees". The brainless Son of Destiny in the front can make us feel happy, but later we have to consider the Son of Destiny with brains (if it doesn't work, just use the homophone to write "Tang Shan" in, I have wanted to beat him up for a long time). I don't mind if there is a heroine, as long as the protagonist will not delay things because of the heroine, and will die for her (anyway, don't be like the protagonist of a harem novel). The Son of Destiny faction can give them some brains, so that there won't be scenes of mindlessly provoking the protagonist for the sake of hydrology. Full of ten stars Writing ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (Although I only give the author seven stars, my writing style can only give four stars at most🐒) Plot ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (Ensure the current quality, then slowly improve it, and strive for a breakthrough in the future) Character ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (The character descriptions are good and each has its own characteristics. I hope there will be a difficult child of luck in the future) What I like about this book is that it has high growth potential. The author can think about how to improve and write the novel better while writing (good soup is brewed slowly). If I have anything else to say later, just comment below. This is all I want to say now.

He has a strange life experience, his parents are both gone, he is either being hunted, or he cannot come back, he is a genius at birth, but suddenly becomes useless, he is often beaten and driven, his elders do not like him, he has been kissed since he was a child, the woman must be relied on, he is humiliated in front of his face, and he vowed to collect debts , or fall off the cliff, you need a jade belt, beads or cauldron, the remaining soul lives in the sea of consciousness, it is very different from now on, the upgrade is very fast, soaring into the sky, all the enemies are trampled, the hero wants to save the beauty, he must offend the rich second generation, kill many people, and lead to the old monster , the strength is not strong enough, and he is forced to jump out of the sea, and he is about to die. The ruins cave opens, and he either drinks dragon blood or eats natural materials. He is reborn and reborn. His skills progress quickly. When he walks into the street, he will find that his pet is a mythical beast. He will spend too much money, so he will auction it if he has nothing to do. , Peers are two levels lower, come if you don't agree, can't stop meddling, loves all beauties, is looking for death all the way, there is always life, the protagonist is cheating, everyone is a dishonest, one world is not enough, go to the Immortal Platform, break the Nine Heavens, live forever and never be defeated.

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I have read some books about villains, and many of them just have a villain in the title, but the protagonist is always doing decent things. I have read more than a hundred chapters of this book so far, and the protagonist does look like a villain.

It's a bit of a parody (our villains don't want to be a stepping stone), but it's not as exciting as that book's exciting storyline! Looking at it, all I can say is that it's an imitation. It's very average. It would be interesting to read that novel again!

Even though the realm has been set, the writing is still a mess. Does the protagonist only see women? Xiao Tian several times for The protagonist doesn't want his life. The protagonist robs him of the opportunity. He also wants to refine his dragon scales. It's really amazing. He does this to a brother who lives and works for him, but he is extremely nice to a few women around him who have just conquered him.

In fact, the subject matter is good. Success involves plundering, and failure also involves plundering. Since luck points are needed, but cannot be taken by force, it results in nondescript and very depressing viewing.

After reading more than fifty chapters, three children of destiny have appeared. Let me talk about my feelings. The flow of the plot is not satisfactory. It is similar to other villain novels. Only when the luck is low to a certain level can the son of luck be killed. The first Son of Destiny was a passionate young man who possessed an old man and could run away. However, due to the "plot killer" who forcibly possessed him, the old man had to obey the Son of Destiny's orders and could not escape, so he forcibly reduced his intelligence to the Son of Destiny. As a result, the protagonist repeatedly suppressed his luck and died. The second son of luck came back again, and he was also very lucky. Because the protagonist and the girlfriend of the son of luck were hugging each other, he attacked the protagonist and was suppressed and ran away. Later, he entered the secret realm and captured Bai Ze, but was beaten to death by the protagonist in the secret realm. How can I put it this way? He looked awesome on the stage and died very quickly. There is no sense of a battle of wits and courage at all, it is extremely bland. If I really want to describe it, this child of luck is very "sloppy" The third one is the Daughter of Luck, the former most talented female disciple of the sect where the protagonist's mother belongs. There is a high probability of being subdued, and now the protagonist has been planted with the slave mark. The description of this senior sister from the time she appeared to the time she was planted with the slave mark, including the narration and the number of words related to this senior sister, should only be a few hundred words. Because she wants to take revenge at the hands of the protagonist, she is willing to be planted with the slave mark. It is really fast. If there hadn't been a guy who wanted to steal the Son from the protagonist, everyone would have thought that that person was the Son of Destiny. The one who snatched the Holy Son was also outrageous. The second day after the protagonist arrived, the arena was set up. As expected, the protagonist won, but he failed and his inner demon appeared. . . Fortunately, his master helped him suppress it, and then the protagonist designed it to let him know that his master was robbing his apprentice. He thought that he was not his master's apprentice, and his inner demons broke out. Then the master and the apprentice received the lunch boxes, and the protagonist cleaned up those who were against him. I know what the author wants to express and the plot development he wants to write, but because the writing style is not good enough, the emotions are somewhat less meaningful, and I feel that there is a lot of foreshadowing missing. Therefore, I feel that each protagonist seems unreal from the appearance to the grave, and the most prominent one is "sloppy". In this regard, I think we can add more psychological descriptions of the sons of luck or daughters of luck, instead of just letting the protagonist pretend to be cool and suppress them all the way. Through the content of the article, we can reduce the intelligence of the sons of luck so that the sons of luck can easily receive their lunch boxes. This will allow people to resist a little more, which shows how difficult it is to kill the sons of luck. Summary: The content is mediocre, basically similar to many villain articles. In terms of plot, the description of the Son of Destiny is too sparse, and it mainly focuses on describing the protagonist's pretense and slaps in the face. As a result, the article seems somewhat brainless, and many of the contents are not well laid out. There are also many contradictions in the plot setting. For example, the main character's family background is so awesome that basically no one dares to mess with it. But apart from the amazement of passers-by, the power groups to which the three protagonists belong have all taken action against the protagonist, as if they have no concerns. There are many similar unreasonable settings, which makes this book feel "tasteless". It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away ~

The plot concept is average. Most of the children of luck are brainless, fragile, and very easy to provoke. It fails to capture the essence of the harem, and describes the women too unfairly. If you give them some benefits, they will be unforgettable, and if you give them some benefits, your mood will change. It belongs to the middle class among many systems.