Taoyao Zhuohua

It was unexpected that the heroine didn't marry anyone in the end, and the story was okay, bland. I still hope that the heroine will find a good home.

Bad writing After all, the heroine is also a modern person who traveled through time. Where will her three views be at the end? First of all, the heroine reprimanded Su Manshu for wanting to abort the enemy's child. What obligation does a person have to give birth to an enemy's child? And the heroine is required to morally kidnap and reprimand someone when they are most sad and weak? Secondly, how many people did King Qi kill and abandon his own daughter just to seek power and usurp the throne? Does he deserve to be forgiven in the end? Is it worthy for the heroine and her own daughter to respectfully treat her as a prince? Author, if you don't want the ending, you don't have to end it. Who are you going to fool by just writing a rubbish ending? Except for the heroine, they are all tool people, right?

It's a bit illogical, and the heroine's ability is at 10%. The plot is good. Xiaoshan is good!

It would be better if there are no typos!

Overall, it's pretty good. I like this kind of article very much, but it seems a bit unfinished. Many things are not explained, and a lot of foreshadowing is scrapped. In fact, it could be written more clearly in about five chapters (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The ending is too rushed, it feels like it's not finished

The storyline has twists and turns without dragging on. But the ending was hasty, and some people and things were not explained clearly. Overall it looks good.

I'm really speechless. It was a good movie, but it ended suddenly and completely failed. Everything written above is good, but if you give me a bad ending, I will be angry in the middle of the night.

I like this kind of plain and warm one,

Although it sucks, it still deserves praise. After all, the writing is good, the plot is good, and it doesn't drag on! If it wasn't a mess, it would be even more perfect!