A Foolish King Is in Power

Bragging too much

It was too sudden. I thought it would be over as soon as I reached the climax

It's been several years, and there haven't been so many women for a child. How is it possible?

It's a pity that this ending is too embarrassing.

Since I lost the war and entered the world, my writing has gotten worse and worse. I couldn't help but skip to the last ten or so chapters. I was speechless when I reached the end. The first part was well written, but the middle part was mediocre and even irritating. Even if the ending is mediocre, it can still be regarded as a readable novel. If it ends badly, I can only say that I am better than you at writing shit.

Don't write it next time

The whole family is unfinished, but it's still watchable, but the main character suddenly dies suddenly, so the end is unfinished.

Super bad

The overall structure is too bad. The writing in the front is smooth and compact, but the ideas in the back are unclear. Then the structure of the article is too stretched, which affects the readability of the whole book. The ending is too hasty.

The previous writing is quite interesting, but the protagonist keeps delaying his arrival in Shu, and the subsequent unfinished work is a bit unjustifiable.