Kuai Wen's Crazy Criticism: the Heroine Is Weak and Pitiful

I'm quite picky when it comes to reading books, but this book really touched my... Heart. I think there are three aspects to evaluating a good book: 1. Plot: The plot is like the context of the whole book and the key to attracting readers. A good plot can catch the readers' attention at once. The beginning of this book seems to be the same as that of all fast-travel novels. There is no big difference, but there are subtle differences in the great unity. There is always a kind of power that attracts you to read on. · Yuesheng is a creature of chaos and evil, so she has the right to do whatever she likes. She is pure innocence and evil, a devil and an angel. Under the innocent appearance is a violent and paranoid heart. The "teacher" guided her to love and protect her, but in the end she killed the teacher with her own hands. She has no empathy, no sympathy, is extremely indifferent, and extremely violent, but she wears sheep's clothing, is as sophisticated and sophisticated as a human being, and plays with people's hearts. Every time I watch the original plot of Planes, I have the illusion that the author must not be good at writing it, because the original plot is always very boring. But slowly looking back, the pale characters become vivid, and the plot of Gou Xue is brilliantly written by the author. Unlike most of the fast-travel novels I've read that are full of routines, and readers don't even need to read further to know what's going to happen. On the contrary, the heroine always plays her cards out of the routine, which is novel and interesting. Every action of the heroine is foreshadowing her plan. The heroine is very smart, she looks harmless and ignorant, but in fact everything is under her control. She always compared the plane to a game. She could arouse anyone's emotions at will, but she stayed away from it and retired after her achievements. Everyone was grateful to her, but they didn't know that she was the culprit. · 2. Writing style: Good writing style is also a key and can be the icing on the cake. It is common to see novels recommended on major video software. Each character is more interesting than the other. I searched for it with excitement. After reading less than 2 chapters, I was directly dismissed because of the poor writing. · After reading this article, it can be seen that the author has certain literary skills and has worked hard to conceive every plot. A few sentences can perfectly display the psychology of each character. I have read a lot of novels, and many of them are poorly understood by the authors. Only the author knows what he wants to express, and the readers are confused. In this book, even the supporting characters are written with full characters. They don't need too much description of appearance. They can capture the readers' hearts with their personality charm alone. Every emotional outburst of the supporting characters seems to be based on the actual life of the author, recording his thoughts at the moment of emotional fluctuations, and bringing this into the novel, which is why it is so touching. The writing style is the icing on the cake for this book, and the author's descriptions of various environments are readily available. When reading, you may not feel the quality of the writing, because good writing has already brought you into the scene. Only with poor writing will you notice the shortcomings and abruptness caused by the writing. Only by paying attention to and savoring every word can you discover the difference in this book. Because I am also a writer, when I read a book, I will unconsciously analyze and evaluate the book. I will never look at it as a reader, but from the perspective of "Bang Jing". From the first world to the present, it can be seen that the author's writing style has improved a little bit. When I first read the first world, some parts of the writing still made me feel awkward and confused. When I came to the royal concubine plane, I could no longer find any big problems. I even subconsciously read this book as a reader. · 3. The heroine's character: The heroine's character is the finishing touch of the book. If you achieve a good plot and good writing, then this book has reached the standard of a good book. There are many such books, but sometimes there are few readers. Why? Because the heroine has no outstanding character and no personal characteristics. Readers like your plot and writing style, but due to the shortcomings of the heroine's character (such as Madonna, Zuozhi), or the heroine's character is the same as other novels, you will directly fall short of the success, lose readers, and even attract criticism. · The heroine in this book has a distinct personality, and there is no cookie-cutter situation. The contrast between being soft and cute on the outside but dark and paranoid on the inside is actually very popular right now. The female lead officer is also decisive and indifferent, and has absolutely no sympathy for the scum. On the surface, she is good for them, but in fact, she pushes them into the abyss step by step. There is no leakage, and there is never a situation where the chain is dropped at a critical moment. Yuesheng is not afraid of pain or death, she is a wolf killer, and she never knows when she will suddenly come up and stab you while she is smiling sweetly. In fact, when we are in a difficult situation, we will never compromise. In the worst case, we will die together. Yuesheng always expresses her feelings for the male protagonist as "like", but this kind of love is the same as her love for her own toys and pets. She is very possessive, only she can hurt him, and only she can kill him. The male protagonist is always deceived by Yuesheng's appearance at first, but later he slowly discovers that she is a madman, and her changing face is like turning the page in a book. This contrast and desire to explore attract him and readers even more. Of course, there are also some babies who don't like the heroine's character, but the author has already avoided the lightning in advance. If you don't like it, you can leave it~ · In short, all three are indispensable. However, I think this article also has some shortcomings. For example, in the second CEO dimension with split personality, the emotional line is unclear, the development is a bit confusing, and there is no more detailed and comprehensive description of the psychological activities of the male protagonist. But other than that, everything is good, especially the ending, which is both sweet and sad, and it captures the reader's heart. (I can't post it, because I have a sensitive word. I don't know which word is sensitive, so I can only use homophones instead😶)

Ahhhhhh, I really love this article. I won't lose money if I invest in it! Believe me! If you like to read stories about two sick girls, you must try it! I really love Shuangqiang. The heroine gave me the feeling of sesame glutinous rice balls. They are white and soft on the outside and super sweet when you bite them, but they are filled with sesame seeds and are black on the inside. Both of them are pretending to be pigs and eating tigers! The characters of the male and female protagonists have been introduced in detail, so I won't go into details. But the plot is really amazing, and it's really a great novel. It can be said that it's even more enjoyable than some other great novels! At first, I didn't really like watching the female protagonist be yandere, and I always felt something was wrong. Until I came across this article, ahhhhhh, who can resist Shengsheng who looks sweet and soft but is yandere in her heart~ But. It was the male protagonist who took the initiative, and he is also a good and law-abiding citizen. At least he didn't always say, "If you look at other men, I'll dig out your eyeballs." The heroine gave me the feeling of an angel returning from hell. Her white wings were stained with bright red blood. The smell of blood, tick tick tick... Made me feel amazing, but I didn't dare to get close. Well, I'll give you an excerpt: The iron chain around his neck brought a violent suffocation feeling. Lu Anhe reflexively wanted to throw him over his shoulder. But when he held the slender and smooth wrist, he suddenly stopped. Just when he paused for a second, Yue Sheng kicked his knee hard without any hesitation. Lu An snorted and knelt down. … There's a lot more to come, so just read it yourself (actually I'm just too lazy to type). This book is absolutely beautiful! Otherwise, I will twist off my head and play it as a football for you! _(´□`‖ ∠)_I will be sad if anyone misses this article.

Highly recommended! Highly recommended! Highly recommended! Believe me, after reading this book, you will feel that all the yandere novels you have read before are fake. Who doesn't love the crazy criticizing male and female protagonists? Yue Sheng, who was punished for being the top manager of Shasi (Yue Sheng's teacher), had to enter the small world to conquer the original male protagonist and reach 100 favorability points before exiting the small world. They asked Ma Tuan (criminal reform system) to supervise Yue Sheng's transformation task. But how could Yue Sheng be such an obedient person? Instead of conquering the original male protagonist, she went to provoke the villains in the small world... Yuesheng is a very possessive, sweet and crazy lady. Do you think she is a soft woman who has no power to restrain a chicken? Leak! She is actually a hell messenger who is very good at torturing people. She is good at saying the harshest words in the softest tone. She is kind-hearted and does not kill people casually. She only tortures people and has a suspicious life. She can't survive and can't be killed. The fake and well-behaved real daughter VS the real crazy criticizing the big bad wolf｜Campus→President Lu Anhe appears to be a gentle and graceful senior, but in reality he is a super lunatic. The fastest way to make money is to break the law or risk one's life. He chooses the latter. The motorcycle rider No. 7, Who set a record of winning three consecutive games, also bent over for his little moon. He said, "I'm doing well. Look, praise me..." She said, "You can't keep me." He said, "Then I'll find you... If you find me, can you kiss me?" (In this small world, Shengsheng is the real daughter of the Mu family, but she was tricked by the nanny and finally used by her biological parents as a substitute bride for their daughter) The sick and pitiful Canary VS the CEO with dual personality｜The wealthy CEO Ji Yuan, as an illegitimate CEO with a dual personality, used thunderous means to conquer half of his country without being welcomed by the family leader. However, his second personality, which he called a waste, always made him crazy and self-cancer. He closed himself up and locked himself up, building an iron wall with no weaknesses. But after meeting Yue Sheng, everything changed. He was very guarded against the outside world and he would also take the initiative to take off all disguises. The girl's soft "Uncle" made him willing to sink. The girl said, "I am terminally ill and will die soon. Uncle, don't be sad." He said, "Don't joke... I hate you." Five years after the girl passed away, he cut his wrists and followed him. He is a legend in the business world, but he is also her Uncle Ji. (In this small world, the girl is the tool used by the original male protagonist to control Ji Yuan. But if the tool rebels, it is no longer a tool...) Charming Young Woman VS Ascetic Warlord｜Republic of China Shen Changan, an ascetic warlord who was not close to women, would also be dazzled by a delicate flower of human wealth. In the final battle of defense, he died gloriously. In one hand, he held the flagpole that would never fall, and in the other hand, he held the hairpin of his beloved woman. Since ancient times, the family and the country have been faced with a dilemma. But he used his life to interpret its opposite. (In this small world, Shengsheng is a noble lady whose feet are bound in a feudal landlord's family. She is disliked by the original male protagonist who claims to be a progressive youth of the times) The stunning enchantress VS the tyrant of the enemy country｜Nurture and strategy How could Ying Yu, a prince of an enemy country who had been heartbroken since he was a child, forget all the suffering he had suffered? He carefully hid his edge and perfectly played the role of a submissive and untempered proton. He thought that the aloof concubine was just interested in him, but he did not expect that both of them were sincerely interested. "Yue Sheng" and "Yu" are the couple's country names given to each other by the other. She said, "This country It's a gift from me." He said, "Thousands of miles of mountains and rivers are not as good as my bright moon." When he was about to die, he asked, "Will you die for me?" She replied, "Of course," and he changed the subject. "I can't bear to have you die for me." He held her wrist and slowly stabbed the knife into his chest. The gods gave him new life and death. At the last moment, she said, "I'm coming to find you~" (In this world, Sheng Sheng was used as a shield by Emperor Liang to care for his loved ones, and she was also the eldest lady in the hands of everyone in the general's palace who helped Wei Zheng rise to power) 18th-tier actress VS obsessive-compulsive mysophobic actor｜Entertainment circle Qi Yu, an actor with obsessive-compulsive disorder and mysophobia, has an outrageous and pitiful experience. A celebrity who refuses to touch anyone is actually obsessed with the feeling of being touched by an 18-tier actress. Isn't it particularly exciting to hide from the camera in a love show and then douqing? At the final award ceremony, he agreed to be a special guest for the first time for his little moon. He said, "I am not afraid of thousands of people blocking me. I am afraid that you are not willing to be my light." In front of millions of people, under the spotlight He kissed his moon (In this small world, Shengsheng is an innocent drinking machine played around by a romantic entertainment company president) The "mortal" girl who was expelled from her master's sect VS the pure-hearted and ruthless Immortal Lord Yi Chen, a pure and unhappy ruthless Taoist immortal, destroyed his little disciple's spiritual altar because she had a crush on him. He turned her into a mortal and expelled her from the master. Unexpectedly, when they met again, he was fascinated by his little disciple (after changing the core). After the last line of defense was defeated, he gave up completely. From then on, there was no life in his eyes, only his moon. Enjoy the joy. The cute Demon Lord, who no one dared to approach since birth, was led astray step by step by Sheng Sheng. However, he had no sense of shame and did not understand the meaning of love between children. He only knew that he was his disciple and he had to pamper him. The two people who couldn't give in to each other found out in the end that they were actually the same person. This was really a big joke... (In this small world, Sheng Sheng was a mortal girl who was expelled from her master. Later, she was picked up by the Demon Lord and became her disciple. After the Demon Lord went to sleep, she ran to the Huanyuzong to tease the Immortal Lord. When she was acting to whet her appetite, something happened - Jinhuan woke up early, and the Shura field for two men and one woman began.) Crazy criticism of the female ghost king in red VS the weak and pitiful little Taoist priest｜Fantasy, Taoist priest Xie Chiyuan's parents died when he was young, and his school was massacred. As the only survivor, he was inevitably cast aside by the world and became the broom star in their mouths. His world had never seen the light, but he met a 16-year-old ghost king girl who was sacrificed to death. He fell in love with her uncontrollably. She said, "What will happen to you if I leave?" He said, "With you, life or death is yours." (In this small world, Yue Sheng is the Miss Bai family who was framed and sacrificed by her sister. Her original power made her the ghost king) Juanjuan's writing style is very good, and the golden sentences are everywhere. Those who like reading about double-sick girls or excellent writing should not miss it.

Friends who like to read yandere novels can buy this book! ! ! Both yanderes! The heroine: Crazy and yandere, because she confessed to the teacher, she killed the teacher directly after being rejected, and then she was transformed through the system. (Speaking of which, hugging poor Ma Tuan, not only did the transformation not succeed, but she was also transformed by the heroine, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha) The villains in each world are all male protagonists! As for why he is the villain, there was a little accident in the middle 😂 At first, he and the heroine were a little cold, but later it was almost love at first sight (the hero liked the heroine and refused to confess because the heroine at the time didn't know what love was, so he taught the heroine to love in this way) … I'm not very good at writing reviews, but friends who like yandere literature can add it to the bookshelf, and you won't lose money by investing in it! ! ! Finally, come on Juan Juan! ! !

So good👍Love it so much↖(^ω^)↗(´ε｀ )

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It can be said that this book was my salvation during my book shortage. ( ˙˘˙ ) • He is very cute and can interact with book friends. He is not the kind who can't reply f^^*). Very active! ! ! The prerequisite for a good book is to have a good author. It is predicted that this book will be popular, and it will definitely be popular! ! !ヽ(ﾟ∀ﾟ)ﾉ • The heroine is so cute! I like the heroine so much~~ She doesn't know how to love now, so she needs the guidance of the male protagonist so that the heroine can gradually learn to love. The male protagonist is the kind of person who is in deep darkness, and the female protagonist is the light that comes to save the male protagonist. Ah~ I really love this kind of two-way redemption! ! (Get a vaccination first! Please enter the female protagonist, because the male protagonist may be abused in the front, which will be a bit miserable! The male protagonist should be careful before entering!!) • In the first dimension, Sheng Sheng was at the engagement party with the man named Liang Yin. Isn't Sheng Sheng so beautiful? ! ! "The white tulle tube top dress is studded with diamonds, which perfectly outlines her beautiful waist. Wearing a white gauze on her head, it hung down to her shoulder blades, and the broken gemstones on the small silver crown shone brightly, as if the stars in the sky had fallen on her body, but it could not cover up the brightness of the moon at all. At this moment, the princess in the fairy tale seemed to take shape. Today, she is the most beautiful princess. " (With deletions) I really love this part (⑉°з°)-♡ • (The first aspect) The male protagonist is also quite pitiful. He dragged Mingyue in from the abyss, thinking that the moon would leave him forever. In such despair, the moon suddenly got into his arms. When Shengsheng was about to leave, Lu Mou affectionately asked her to stay, but Shengsheng only said, "You can't keep me." I broke my guard instantly... Lu Mou forced a smile: How could Mingyue stay for the abyss. • This book is very good, recommended! ! I wish this book will get better and better! ! !

It's not as scary as the bad reviews say, the characterization and plot are pretty good.

Crazy criticism of quick passage articles The writing style is delicate, the characters are full-bodied, the author is clever in conception and good at selecting points to expand. Quack! ! !

How to put it this way, I thought the heroine's character was understandable at first, but my mind changed after I actually entered the plane. I watched three planes, and the first plane made me a little uncomfortable, but I continued to try to watch the other two planes. Even if the heroine is really ignorant of the world, it can't be this performance, right? Isn't her learning ability very strong? Why is there such a huge emotional flaw? Didn't she live a long time? Even if she was well protected, she wouldn't be like this. Of course, she didn't want the heroine to become a virgin bitch. I just think she should have the ability to distinguish right from wrong. Even if she is not a human (maybe it is because he is not a human, so his behavior is a bit unacceptable to me.). All in all, the biggest feeling given to me by the male and female protagonists is that they are self-centered, especially the female protagonist. This is no longer a yandere, this is simply a pervert. The hero's final choice in the third plane still made me change my mind. Three worlds have passed, and she still hasn't learned to love. Maybe the three views are different, but I can't stand it anymore. (The above remarks represent only my personal views)