God's Son-In-Law

This is the first time I read a novel about metaphysics and feng shui. I originally wanted to give it a medium rating because there were many typos; I resurrected the dialogue between Liang Xin and Xiaoxiao in those chapters, which was too long-winded. There are also several points that are foreshadowed but not followed up: 1. How does Lu Chen deal with the little snake that sucks the marrow of the earth dragon? 2. What is the real function of the white jade butterfly pendant? 3. Why did the elder of the Ghost King Sect spend 20 years setting up the evil array? 4. Did Ye Qingling finally take the position of chairman of Yejia Longsheng Group? However, fortunately, the author's professional description of Feng Shui attracted me, and the ending was well written. In order to encourage the author, I have given it a good review and hope that the author's writing will continue to improve.

The plot in the book is very good, but the ending is too simple, as if the mission ended suddenly.

The ending is a bit...

I've been waiting for an update for so long and just ended it in a hurry?

There are a lot of holes left unfilled and unfinished...

Looks good, but updates are too slow

If you don't update in the past ten days, why not stop writing.

Have you ever walked on a mountain road? Have you ever heard of running to death while looking at the mountains? It takes half an hour to walk from one mountain to another, and you feel a little hung up for half a day.

This book is a mess for you to write

There are too many explanations and gossips about key parts. It's similar to the feeling of a TV show that always has commercial breaks when watching the most exciting moments. It's heart-wrenching and even more disappointing to watch.