The Soldier King's Life as a Dad

It's pretty good, but the number of chapters is a bit short, and it only covers the story of this city. Some of the foreshadowings were not used in the end, and the later writing was a bit too hasty, and there are some small details that were not shown. It was just generally skipped and lacked some experiences from it. Overall it's not bad.

The layout of the entire chapter is quite ingenious and the conception is unconventional. The only shortcoming is that there are many typos and some paragraphs and sentences cannot be read smoothly.

The article is very readable and relatively short. I feel it is well written. However, I still feel that the ending is a bit sloppy and I could write more about their married life.

This is my first book review. It's well written and worth reading. It's much better than those books that make you go to heaven and earth to become immortals and demons.

The plot is quite bland, and the ending is a bit sloppy. The male protagonist is very good at martial arts, but why does he always cause trouble to the people around him?

The ending was as satisfying as I thought, which means I still want to see the follow-up.

The plot is too bland, and the author should first understand what the King of Soldiers is? ——Make strategic plans, be decisive and brave, and have strong combat effectiveness. However, strategizing is not reflected in the novel.

This ending sucks

That is to say, in the early stage, the score was cheated. The key is the main words and phrases. There are many mistakes and a lot of typos.

Very good!