I Open Taobao in Wanjie

The protagonist can shock the immortals just after breaking through the soul power in the ancient heaven. Although he is a low-level immortal, he is still much stronger than a mortal, and the protagonist is just a mortal, okay! Since the protagonist is so powerful, why did he become so incompetent in the Three Kingdoms? He could only rely on brute force to kill a few soldiers. Didn't he get thunder magic and spiritual pets from the Thunder God and Lightning Mother in Ancient Heaven? Why don't he use thunder magic to kill people?

The more I look at it, the less interesting it becomes.

Using my name is too much, I'm still a villain

I won't talk about anything else, but the author himself said there are twelve stones in total. Why would Mao come up with the number fifteen in total from left to right? Could it be that the author's mathematics was taught by a physical education teacher?

Okay, I gave up one point. In order to save his mother, the man who kidnapped Qin Yuxuan actually almost killed Qin Yuxuan, but the author is holy, he didn't die, his mother didn't die, the kidnapping gave his mother good health and he had a successful career.

The whole story is full of clichés and pretentiousness, but the heroine is not sure about the whole story at all. Emotional lines are confused. No matter what I do, I always like to sigh and improve my skills. Too vulgar

Except for the ending which was a bit too fast, everything else was very good

No, this ending is a bit hasty.

It sucks? ? ? It's okay if there are various prefaces and subtitles that don't match up, but it's still unfinished in the end? ?

There are too many mistakes in the book