Flying Dragon in the Sky

I don't know if it looks good or not. I'll occupy the sofa first.

The second skill with remaining health is from level 10 to level 11 without panic at all, and activates the ultimate move. The lower the blood volume of Biting Gold, the higher the damage. A flying dragon sent him home in the sky.

I give you a good review. This is the first time in a long time that a book has a finale.

It starts with a Rolls-Royce weighing dozens of tons?

If you are not decisive in killing, you will kill if you say you want to kill. Why do you make the master's martial arts so bright? High martial arts means killing people.

Are there too many typos? I haven't figured it out yet.

The plot is unclear

That's good, but there's too much nonsense. People want to kill but don't want to.

It's just so so, it doesn't depict the domineering spirit of Shura Demon! Generally speaking, a male protagonist should be reticent or silent, but when he speaks, he should be aggressive and decisive.

It should be better than the one with 9.4 Points