The Tycoon Life Begins with Street Vending
神豪从摆地摊开始
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 2.0M Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High Martial Arts
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qimao
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8.2Score
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The protagonist is also really weak. When bullied, he only knows how to call people, but he doesn't know how to do it himself. Do you call afterward? Is there something really wrong? The system does not say there are any martial arts secrets, but at least there should be a potion to enhance physical fitness and become stronger. Everyone becomes a coward when being bullied, and even if they have the ability, they still slip. This is too weak. I feel like you copied the skills from Pokémon and slipped, why don't you use a sharp claw?
How do I put it? This book was well written before Chapter 248, but starting from Chapter 249, it was like a different author. I was not afraid of offending people. The writing was so bad that it made me really uncomfortable to read. It made me have no idea of continuing to read. I hope the author can be more serious.
There are some problems with the second picture. You can go to a building just after signing in, but the problem is that it hasn't been long and you think everyone knows you? This is not mindless. Although the property rights are yours, how long does it take to get them?
Is the protagonist a sheep? He doesn't do anything when provoked and becomes friends with the other person. How generous is this? Either the protagonist should be directly written as a virgin, or the protagonist should be written as a person who enjoys grudges and enmity, a soft person who bullies a strong person and a fearful one.
Where is Ye Qi and Gu Qingwei?
I seriously doubt that the little fat guy traveled back from the future.
As the author kept writing, he forgot what he had written before! Whatever can't be solved with one phone call, another one? The protagonist of a system flow novel has to make phone calls to solve everything. The author's imagination is amazing.
The demolition is only 200,000 yuan, which is a big deal!
Is the author wandering? The sweetness of the writing is inappropriate
There are too many typos and the sentences are not fluent.