My Dad Traveled Through Time

Have a sense of humor! Nice. It's just that the author's imagination is so rich! It's like being there. It's too divine. However, I really like that there are real souls and people in the two worlds can still communicate. It won't be so painful!

I thought it was a life-long, loyal love between two people, but when I looked at it, it seemed cliche. A book written by a man is such a stud. Is it necessary for a beautiful woman to fall in love with the male protagonist? How disgusting! Too lazy to look

What I hate the most is the male protagonist being a dog licker.

The ending is not complete enough. The ending should be about him overcoming the tribulation and successfully ascending to immortality to meet his father, and then doing all kinds of awesome things in the immortal world. Finally, at the end, he takes the girls back to the earth, Jiangcheng, to give birth to children and live a happy life without making a fuss in the world. This is perfect.

It felt like the writing was average, without any ups and downs, and the ending was too sudden. The title was about his father's time travel, and there wasn't much about his father in the book. Most of it was about Li Qianxun's "heroine", which I felt was just average and a bit hasty.

It's not bad that the hero and heroine slowly move from the initial transaction to true love.

Not bad, although short, but not anticlimactic.

The more you watch, the more exciting it becomes

I think the writing in this article is quite excellent. First: At least the plot development is relatively reasonable. The title of the book is about a father who travels through time, not a time travel by himself. The father is an assistant and helps the male protagonist. Therefore, the male protagonist is not some kind of stupid story about being the best in the world. It is written in a more restrained way. Second: There is no nonsense in the plot content one after another, unlike many thousands of chapters that are full of words and keep repeating those few actions and expressions. Third: The article is written in a more spiritual way, giving it an immersive feeling. The details are relatively accurate, and it also writes about the real-life problems of everyone. In this world, everyone is for themselves, and everyone lives according to the rules set by the strong. There is no need to be a virgin bitch, which is so hypocritical. Fourth: The shortcoming of this article is the ending. It ends too quickly, and it starts to be perfunctory near the end. Decades have passed, and it has reached a higher level, but you have not yet connected with the father in the title. You just sum up your inner reaction and end it. I hope the author can continue to write good articles.

I haven't watched it yet, so I'll give it a neutral review first.