Divine Soul Martial Lord

Wang Jingze, with his courtesy name Zhenxiang and his nickname "Iron Bone", was from Changchun, Jilin. Jingze was young and righteous, and everyone wanted to seduce him with cold boiled eggs and fried rice to convince him. Ze was furious, and suddenly he pointed his finger to the sky, and said: "My king, Ze, is suffering from hunger." He put his hand to the ground, and said: "He will die in the wild, and he is facing an unpredictable abyss!"

I just read Chapter 7, and I feel that the plot progresses too quickly and ends too quickly. Jumping here and there, without any assembly line rhythm, the writing is not detailed and refined enough, and feels too casual. Even children's writing is better than yours.

Now I'm reading Chapter 1074, and it's over like this. All my family members are dead. The Beast Emperor and Tian Ling'er all died without explaining anything. Although they met in the Borderless God Realm and promoted them to the God King, the God King has a purpose, and they are not all dead.

Why is it that no one reads such a beautiful book?

The novel was well written before World of Darkness, but later on it seemed that a useless writer who didn't know what to say and could only "smile helplessly", "have no choice" and "spread his hands" turned the novel into rubbish. There were many typos, the words did not convey the meaning, the cultural level was extremely low, and the language was often not fluent.

The plot of this book is written so suddenly, without any connection. One second he was at the counter, and the next second he started practicing medicine. At least it should be explained that he returned to his room. I hope the author can pay attention to correct it.

This is composed of two novels, 1---1074 is the first part, and 1074 is the sequel. Those who can bear to see Chapter 1100 are masters, masters who vomit blood and die.

From the beginning to the end, there are no descendants. Is this the end of the family? There must be an offspring after all! The plot is too simple and has no lingering emotions. The more I watch it, the less water it feels. Is it difficult to write a descendant? Where have the originally important characters and foreshadowing gone? Can you connect the two? I write whatever I want, but I can't understand it. Author, wake up! Read it yourself first. Whatever you write is inconsistent and inconsistent.

Qin Feng, I still have Tang Ren

I saw Chapter 663, and I don't know what happens next, but since Qin Feng entered the God Realm, there are no longer those people with Chaos. Where is his master? There are others. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore. There's no reason at all.