On Our Wedding Night, My Foolish Husband Cried in My Arms

It was well written, but the ending felt a little rushed, and some people and things were not explained clearly.

That bell, two bells, three bells, four bells, hahahaha, the author's name is so cute! Hey-hey

Why are Xue Rengui and Wang Baochuan together? Isn't Wang Baochuan and Xue Pinggui together?

Why do you think this heroine never used her brain? Apart from making some money, she didn't investigate anything when she was being chased. Even when she was stabbed in the waist, she had to wait until the prisoner came forward to reveal the truth!!!! Why do you think the heroine of this novel is a bystander, and others are the heroines?

Doesn't she have space for banknotes? Why didn't you put it in and it got burned?

The plot and narrative rhythm are very good, and there are a lot of CPs. The male and female protagonists are so sweet!! All kinds of difficulties and incidents are finally solved with the concerted efforts of the male and female protagonists. I especially like this kind of story where the heroine is not silly and sweet. However, I gave it a neutral rating, mainly because there were so many typos at the end (even Ye Qianling was written as Ye Dailing!) And the pace was very hasty, and many people and things were not explained clearly. It was really painful to read, after all, I have actually been looking forward to the happy ending of these characters for a long time. Putting aside the story of Qiu Zhiheng and the princess, the wedding of Ye Qianling and Jian Xunye was not directly described, but was briefly mentioned... Although it was a happy ending, I still felt unsatisfied. I think every character should have an explanation. I think the author should have his own reasons for ending in such a sloppy way. We readers like big articles so much, so of course we will understand. But I still hope that the author can take his work seriously and complete it well. I really like Da Da's writing style. I hope there will be more and better works XD~

Why is the writing so poor at the end? Could it be that the author is looking for someone to catch him? It feels like he is telling things in a straightforward way and explaining things. It's so uncomfortable to read. It doesn't feel like it was written by the same person as the previous one.

It looks good, but the heroine is too self-righteous and always hurts others. Although it is said that helping is a matter of friendship and not helping is a duty, then don't take the porcelain job without the diamond. It always hurts people. Miss Yue's lover, the prince concubine, and the husband-to-be of the orb, if the heroine was not self-righteous, maybe she would not die.

The ending was too hasty, anticlimactic, and ending

Why leave the banknotes outside when there is space? The heroine is also a fool