The Campus Belle's Bodyguard

There are a lot of typos. Can you be more serious?

When I first read the introduction, it was nothing. It wasn't until I read the main text that I realized how interesting it was.

There are a lot of typos and too much nonsense.

Too many typos

The writing is quite good. The first part is pretty good but I don't know why it becomes more and more perfunctory later on. I hope the author can be more serious. The second part can be written in one or two sentences but drags on to 4 or 5 chapters. It's quite uncomfortable to watch. Too much nonsense

Hahahaha, the comments are pretty good, I'll have to take a look before talking about it. (◔◡◔)

The writing is okay, much better than some novels. The requirements can't be too high. Just be able to read it. As long as the updates can keep up.

I just updated it after reading it, haha

Not bad

Come and take a look, author, come on