The First Immortal of Swordsmanship

This book is one of the most satisfying ones I have read among the Seven Cats. The details, structure, tone, and ideas of the characters are consistent with the characters I imagined. They all have a large system, and there are details describing the places, and even the food. It has the ethereal pursuit of immortality, but also has details that fit people's needs. Such books cannot be read one after another. They must be collected together so that they can be imagined and even brought into the mind to make them interesting. I love so much

1. The rendering of the protagonist is still possible 2. The early stage of the story taking place in a small town was okay, and the supporting characters also had their own unique personalities. 3. It was very dull after leaving the small town. The innate martial arts, Yuan Dao, and spiritual Dao were exaggerated in the previous stage. After appearing on the scene, I found that the layout and vision were not as high as those of the head of the Huang family in the world. 4. The geographical planning and timeline are a bit flawed. It explains that each country has a vast land, rich resources, and vast territory. As a result, it took 2 or 3 months to travel all around. You read that right, it was a complete journey, and there was still one month to go to Beijing, not to mention encounters in various other forbidden places. 5. Most of the so-called good people around me get to know each other through women, and then nothing happens. Except for Cha Jin, who is a bit full of characters, the others are just minor characters (gorgeous minor characters), because at the beginning they will use words such as so-called genius or heroic figure to deliberately emphasize it.

To be honest, this book on Kendo is completely different from "Fu Huang" and "Tianjiao", but it feels better written and very attractive than the first two. The author could have done more to hit 5 more⊙▽⊙ (By the way, is it possible for Cha Jin to become a female 2? I don't think so. Welcome to leave a message for discussion)

The book is really wonderful! First of all, the protagonist of this novel is very scheming, not pretentious or hesitant, and is calm and collected in situations, which is in line with the setting of a hundred thousand years ago, unlike other novels where the protagonist's IQ is not online. Secondly, the writing style is smooth and beautiful, and the descriptive sentences are brilliant. Judging from the writing style, it has already surpassed many novels in an instant. The author is indeed very powerful. Also, the plot is coherent and not laggy, and there is no nonsense! Under the seemingly invincible aura of the protagonist, the writing is not stereotyped, but unique and eye-catching! The plot is as exciting as peeling off the cocoon, and it can be said to be one of the few good books by Qimao worth reading.

The plot is okay, but there are too many women! It makes me sad to see that these talented people are all women, all beautiful women. Is this a matriarchal society? Don't men have an inherent advantage in deciding the world through force? There are more women at the end of this book, so there is no need to read it.

Hundreds of chapters later in this book, Shui Yi is overly pretentious, and will kill if he disagrees with you. He will kill him if he doesn't say a few words. If you like to mess with pigs, and you want to argue with others about a few words, then walk away quickly, or kill him quickly. Hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, I don't know how to describe it, it's a bloody plot.

Does anyone know of a novel similar to this book, in which the protagonist was very awesome in his previous life, but after his reincarnation, his mentality is not that of constantly fighting against the world, but that of a calm state of mind, with everything planned out? Thank you for your recommendation.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I didn't have any setbacks after the protagonist's awakening. It was an instant kill all the way. The plot is bland and has no ups and downs. Basically, the story is that the other party is powerful and looks down on the male protagonist. After the male protagonist shows off, he either kills or accepts it. The scripts are basically the same. He was betrayed by one of his own people in his previous life, but he still accepts his younger brother casually in this life. So many good reviews are all just brushes, right?

I can guess the plot after Chapter 3 After saving that person, he was ridiculed when he returned home. When he woke up, he was the same person. Who knew to call him sir? Then all the way to the top, the new block will kill the god, and the Buddha will block the Buddha. Can you be a little innovative? Wow, you're just copying the gourd, I'll go, I've read no less than ten books of your version╯▂╰b

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