The White Moonlight That Traveled Through Time and Became the Emperor

The female protagonist is too weak. I wrote another time-traveling woman to be omnipotent. She can kill whoever she wants without others noticing. It is illogical. It is illogical to write a male protagonist who doesn't cherish what he has gained and wants to gain after losing. I can't stand it anymore. I don't like this type of writing.

The plot becomes more and more confusing as we write it down. Isn't Bai Wei Jiang Wan's good sister? Isn't Lu Ye Ye's brother? It's all messed up later on.

Why do I feel like this was not written by one person? It's so inconsistent.

The more I write, the messier it becomes, and I can't stand it anymore.

Sometimes it's really baffling. Isn't the heroine supposed to be a strong woman? At some point, she doesn't even look like a modern person. And wasn't the Queen Mother killed a long time ago, and the Queen Mother later gave Lu Ye a concubine? ? ? ? ? ? Mess