The Sinister Evil King Comes to Your Door

After reading the full text, I have to say that the author has passed over many plots without going into details. The overall feeling is like reading an outline, and many places did not explain what will happen next. Especially when the whole plot goes awry, IMHO, the character of west Liang is the beginning of the biggest failure. Although Tuoba Yan seems to be very affectionate and miserable in the end, the plot that was expanded to set off this character is simply too broken, the combat power collapses, the plot is forced to reach the world of gods, etc. Let's not talk about these things. Let's just talk about Tuoba Yan. It's true that he has three thousand beauties in the harem to be affectionate. You said you calculated everything, but did you calculate that you would sleep with so many people? Just watch for tens of thousands of years? No, no, no. It can also be seen here that the author is adding settings as he writes, and there should be no excessive inconsistency. Not to mention the plot of Nanzhao, which is very fragmentary, and even adds a demon at the end who doesn't realize that he actually has a crush on the heroine. Is it interesting for you to write this at this time? What's the point? Is there any foreshadowing? It's purely redundant and superfluous. Then there's the heroine's face to face. Every "reinforcement" from the heroine is destroying the hero's plan. The hero not only has to face waves of enemies, but also has to make up for the pits dug by the heroine in time. It's miserable in one word. But for many people who offended the heroine, plotted against her or killed her friends, the heroine picked them up heavily and put them down gently, such as Mrs. Gu. This also shows that the plot of this article is extremely fragmented. The most disgusting thing is the past life settings of the male protagonist and the male supporting character. The male supporting character is the female protagonist's favorite in the previous life, and the male protagonist is the God Realm version of the inflatable doll. I am really convinced. The above are some of the points I want to complain about the most. Since you can still watch it if you don't use your brain and just watch it for fun, I'll give it a neutral rating.

I often think that if this novel is made into a TV series, I wonder who in real life can act like the male protagonist with an alluring appearance! I finally finished chasing it, and I really admire the author's imagination for being able to write such a complicated and abandoned story so smoothly! Everyone has multiple identities, and they don't even know what their ultimate goal is until the end! If it weren't for the subsequent supplements, the sudden ending would have really made me feel uncomfortable, and I felt so disappointed! All in all, the ending is quite satisfactory!

To be honest, I couldn't keep watching. Isn't the heroine a surgical expert who traveled through time? She behaves more stupidly than people in ancient times, and is not clever at all. The author obviously wants to highlight that the heroines are smart, but it is a pity that he does not have the ability to do so, so he abandoned the article.

The description at the beginning is quite accurate, at least it tells us that not all time-traveling women have golden fingers. From the beginning, like us ordinary people, she couldn't rely on anything and relied entirely on will and little tricks. After going through a lot of hardships, he finally inherited his divine power. But I just felt that the ending was too rushed! Tuoba Yan is excellent but it's a pity! What kind of story is there in those purple eyes in the sea of ​​flowers on the other side of the sky? Why not write all the extra stories about the three children? What a pity!

After reading more than 800 chapters, I really don't have the courage to continue reading. The plot is messy. At first, the photo studio and the like were written very well, but then when something happened, she became a scumbag. The heroine was liked and kissed in all kinds of ways. She clearly hated the King of Xiliang, but she was kind-hearted and rescued her in various ways. Washing clothes and cooking? ? ? Abandon the article Abandon the article

I watched it continuously at the beginning, but I couldn't stand it anymore when I got to the middle. Then skip to the end. The heroine is a troublemaker, has no skills, doesn't care about reputation, is complacent when she gets into trouble, has no ability to fight back, is shameless, incompetent, doesn't know what to love and hate, she might as well be a green tea bitch, that's all, kissing and hugging others every day, sleeping on the same bed, but she wants to be the same person for the rest of her life. He's quite thick-skinned. The most speechless thing is that I still rely on this to take it all. God also likes her and so does the devil. The length of the later pages expanded, and the author felt that he was no longer able to control it, so he had no choice but to bite the bullet and continue writing. He even wrote about the world of gods and the world of ants. Many places in the back are superfluous, the preface does not match the afterword, there are too many irrelevant characters, and I want to analyze human nature, so the length of the book is too long to be nagging and grinding, resulting in the protagonist having little personality charm and brilliance. If you want to watch happy endings and everyone is happy, think again. All in all, the writing is quite satisfactory, so those who are not too picky can skip it and read it.

It's hard to see Chapter 586! It's not easy! I came to read the comments because I couldn't stand it anymore. The heroine is really too holy, isn't she? Nosy again! NC again! He says he doesn't like trouble, but he always looks for trouble! And kissing this one and biting that one! Hug this one and hug that one! And they are still unfamiliar people! ? It's too casual! Where do you place the male protagonist? Being bullied and scolded and fighting back is weak, it doesn't feel any better! Moreover, many of the settings in the article feel like they came up suddenly and then left them alone. They added settings as they were written, digging holes without filling them in! People who value you are killed, as other book friends said, pick it up heavily and put it down gently! 🤣 The heroine has no skills but she insists on giving so many settings, such as studying medicine, learning martial arts, opening a restaurant, writing a painting book, building a house for charity, opening a school, etc... Cooking is a skill that is more consistent throughout! I am also speechless, many of them are written on the fly~! I feel sorry for the male protagonist! The rest is such a mess! After seeing other book friends say that the later content is even more exaggerated, I have decided to abandon this book!

Yes, there is so much messy writing that I don't even want to read it carefully. Every time I'm victimized, it seems like I'm done with it, and then I continue to be victimized? The heroine is nothing special, right? The surgeon seems to be of no use and doesn't know how to treat patients, so he just performs an operation and causes a lot of trouble. Why bother? Self-abuse? It seems like there is no way to fight back when being bullied. Also, what does the setting "Body Toxic" do? And a snake? This golden finger is a bit weird and seems to have little effect. It's a mess, so many handsome guys are interested in her, the heroine's character is not that great, how can she be so attractive, she has such an awesome boyfriend and is bullied like a dog, and there are two sisters who murdered her, I really don't remember it at all, it makes my head hurt. . . It feels like endless trouble

The writing is good, but I always feel that too many people write about things that are irrelevant.

The heroine carries her husband on her back, hugs her, kisses her, kisses her every day, and is just short of the last step of actually cheating on him. She feels sorry for the hero, but also feels disgusted.