The Bai Family’s Legitimate Daughter

This is my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize me. First of all, from the names of people, official positions, rankings, etc. In this novel, we can see that the author himself was a little confused in his thinking when writing. Things like Zhang Guan and Li Dai often happen, and sometimes the readers have to guess who the story is about based on the plot. The proofreading work was not done well when it was finally put on the shelves. Secondly, the second point is that the description of the incident is anticlimactic. At the beginning, it was said that this person was hidden and how well he disguised himself. It also did not mention how he was suspected of this person and was arrested. The ending is also a bit too fast, with no transition ahead. A person with a huge layout was easily brought down? The male protagonist's tiger body shook all directions and came to throw? It was not explained clearly. Third, the heroine and the hero have some flaws in their characters. In the previous generation, the heroine knew that her aunt and concubine had evil intentions, and she never paid much attention to them or took precautions in this life. I know that the author probably wanted to write that the heroine is a kind girl, but if she is too kind, she becomes a virgin. The heroine seems to be able to forgive everything. Not only the heroine has this problem, but also various supporting characters. A maid who comes from nowhere can be taken as a confidant, and there is no need to be wary at all. Fourth, the power of the big boss behind him is too strong. If any readers read my comments and then read the article, please help me count how many masters the two maids Zhilan and Zhirong have experienced from beginning to end. All the masters easily brought these two maids as their confidants. Isn't it a bit too fake? Fifth, there are too many holes in the article that have been dug but not filled. For example, it is not clear how Miao Yu, Butler Zhu's mistress, was caught. At first, he was describing how cautious Miao Yu was, but he was suddenly arrested. And why does the heroine keep drinking Bizi Soup? This is not made clear either. Sixth, the male protagonist and the female protagonist do nothing but fight with various servants outside the family from the beginning to the end. They think about these girls and boys every day and have not yet figured it out clearly. They are often plotted against each other, and they don't remember to eat or fight, so they are unprepared. The male protagonist's ability is also a bit weak. He can't even control his own palace. All kinds of monsters and monsters can show their magical powers. A palace is as unsafe as an inn. In the end, it's okay to cheat all the way. That's all I can think of for now. If I have new ideas, I will continue to add them. I hope the cuties who have read my comments will leave me a mark and let me know if someone has read them. Thank you.

I really want to eat sweets from the prince and Qi Simin... But when I think about the fact that the prince will become the emperor and marry so many concubines, I feel that Qi Simin may leave the prince and leave his hometown in the end.

He looked confused, and his words did not match his words. Aunt Zhao gave birth to a sister, right, and Mrs. Qi gave birth to a legitimate daughter, right? It was clearly stated that a concubine could not give birth to a child in front of his wife. He was afraid that his wife would cause trouble with the Qi family, so he had to ask her to abort the child before taking Aunt Zhao as a concubine. So what is this whole thing about? The concubine gave birth to a sister. Could it be that when she was pregnant with twins, one was born and the other was left? I just gave up when I saw this place.

Although I haven't read it yet, I think the introduction should be very interesting, but I would like to ask if the introduction can be longer. I won't say it in the middle of the last sentence. It's too exciting. ♥ Good review

The front looks pretty good. Until today, I saw that the prince lost his memory and met Shu Yue after losing his memory. How long will this old joke be used?? Instantly low by several levels

The male protagonist misses his old love, Liu Xing'er, Shu Yue and Tong Yueyao, all the concubines. I really don't know why he bypasses them again and again to make things difficult for the female protagonist. He also writes the prince to death. The most speechless thing is to write the prince to death.

I want to change the review. It's rubbish. It's so pretentious and full of typos. I really can't stand it anymore.

I really like this book. My only regret is that the male protagonist is not clean anymore. (Please don't express your personal opinions)

The story is okay, but the plot arrangement is too messy. A good thing is inserted into another unrelated plot halfway through the writing, which is tasteless and delayed. Occasionally, it's okay to use it like this to create some suspense and keep people watching, but using it all the time is too much.

The male protagonist in the first few chapters is so stupid.