King of the Whole Life

The first few chapters were okay, but the last few chapters were clearly written with big problems. The ending was too sloppy, and it ended all at once. Many places were not considered thoroughly, and it was too abrupt. The Guan family part did not end well, and it disappeared inexplicably. The more I read, the more it gave people a weird scrawl feeling, as if it was written in a hurry.

There are a lot of pitfalls that have not been filled in. The story framework is good, but the specific content of each section of the story is a bit sloppy and anxious. He is a writer who takes a lot of time.

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I laughed, haha, okay, at this level, it's too useless.

What kind of bullshit is written? I really can't stand it anymore. The male protagonist is written like a one-two punch.

What is it? People who look at it are dizzy.

What is this? Chapter 418 is obviously just a make-up. It's really shameful.

The writing is so bad that I really can't stand it.

I have to write about Liu Jie. Liu Jie is my husband. No matter how much I write about it, I will give it a negative review.