Fighting Dragon in the Capital

Getting worse and worse

In Chapter 20, there is a problem with the character logic. When Su Jiajia was thirteen or fourteen years old, his brother went to be a soldier. Now she is seventeen, which means that his brother has only been a soldier for three to four years. The problem came when her brother died in the mission three years ago. If you write Su Jiajia's age older, his brother will not have this problem. The normal recruitment age Eighteen years old, the protagonist is only twenty-three years old. You must first explain that these people are specially recruited talents from the special forces. They were recruited into the army to study and train at the age of thirteen or fourteen. There must be some logic in the characters, time and events, and they can be reasoned with experience. This kind of book can be written by anyone who has time. Only if you are more rigorous can you become a popular writer.

Wang Chen was too wanton and reckless in the middle part. No matter what, he should have a sense of justice. He didn't say anything and was disrespectful. Oh, so disappointing.

You can still read the previous one, but after reading more than 200 chapters about stallions, I hate stallion novels so much that I stopped reading.

I'm so fascinated after reading more than 400 chapters.

I stopped reading after reading the comments, bye!

I didn't understand the final knot.

Every time she uses dragon blood boiling, she says it costs a lot, but her mother still uses it every time? Is there anything you can do after using it? What rubbish is written?

After Chapter 400, I started writing randomly. It's confusing and illogical.

It's really not that good, the ending is a mess