Legend of Heroes of China

After reading Chapter 10, it is clear at a glance that the opening plot is Tudou's break-up of the engagement. The details are handled well, but if the subsequent plot is too bland, it will be abandoned. Or as the saying goes, recognize books but not people. Good reading is the most basic requirement for writing a book, but it should not deviate from the topic. At least it should make people want to read on, right?

This is my first time writing a novel. It's a completely different mood than reading a novel. I just hope that I can write the complete story I want. I hope I can write more decently as time goes by.

(づ ●─● )づ

What a great book, please support the author!

Come on

It would be better if the fighting is more exciting, praise!

It's okay to write, but the protagonist was struck thousands of times by Gui Yuanjing's lightning at the beginning, but he didn't die? I've only read a few chapters, but I don't know if Guiyuan Jing is powerful?

Could the author check it? There are a lot of typos. The content of the book is quite attractive, but the typos lower the quality.

The male protagonist is arrogant even though he has some skills. Superficial! Abandoned

I hope the author can add a little more mystery. Don't always see the ending from the beginning. If it's too popular, no one will like it.