Danwu Shuangjue

I have to say that I admire the author very much

The explanations and reasoning are too long, and many chapters go by without much plot. It feels like a lot of nonsense.

Where is your invisibility pill😥😥, I almost finished reading it and it only appeared once😨😨😨, to be continued... Come on...

By calling the other party's son "Gunzi" and "yesterday's flower", the author is testing the reader's Chinese proficiency, right?

A god becomes a mortal after bankruptcy and starts a new business in an era when spiritual energy is lacking. With thousands of years of experience, he has long passed the age of arrogance. His ability to judge people, deal with things, and avoid troubles should be at the extreme. Don't talk nonsense about things that can be solved with a slap. The more nonsense the protagonist's abilities become, the worse the protagonist's abilities will be. Only when enemies from humans to gods or from 1 to 100 million people (realm or number of people) can be dealt with easily, can they be called invincible.

It doesn't look good. I feel that the author's writing style is very childish and messy.

The only downfall is that I have a rubbish sister and I don't even want to read it. I can't get away with bad reviews! Teeth

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I can't help but complain, Qin Qing is probably a teenager, why does she talk and act like a teenager? Does the author have any misunderstandings about teenage girls? I really don't think it's so innocent and cute, I just think it's fake and pretentious

In fact, the book is pretty good! ! ! There are too many typos. The author shouldn't use typos to make up the numbers. . .

The pretense is all about the master who is kind to him. There is no bottom line in the novel. He is not reborn as the Alchemy God. After he saw his master reborn, he still looked down on the Alchemy King. Without your master in the previous life, you might still be a beggar!