The Dragon Roams the Firmament

Not bad, not bad

If someone wants to kill you, why don't you let them go? If they want to kill you, why don't you let them go?

Good

Is it difficult to type the name of pig's feet or does it sound too unpleasant? It's always for teenagers!

The blood relationship between people is unclear, it is unclear what is a cousin and what is a cousin, and some plots are contradictory.

There is too much detail, and the thinking and writing style are relatively immature.

The story is compact, the plot is exciting, the characters are reasonably drawn, and the characteristics are distinctive. It is free from the typical cultivators. I look forward to the reappearance of good works. It is recommended to pay attention.

It's just so-so. The protagonist's strength feels too bad. He's only a little stronger than others at the same level. Those who are one level higher than him can't do it, or they have a hard time winning.

A bit wordy

Are you talking about good-looking or good-looking? Cheating and upgrading