The First Development of Fubao Dumplings

The writing is relatively smooth, and the language in the first half is humorous, relaxed, and very warm. I feel that the pace of the plot is a bit slow. It would be better if it could be more ups and downs! Although the heroine travels through time, there is no golden finger or hardships, but more hard work, steady study, and making herself stronger step by step! There are many uneasy thoughts in the book. Why didn't Concubine Jing leave the palace in the end? She can leave the palace and live with A Ying. Should she be able to leave the palace after her father died? Yun Qi is the most interesting person in the whole book. He is such a beautiful and warm person who gives all his affection and love to A Ying. Although there is no response, he still keeps this friendship deep in his heart. How great it would be if he could truly be with Xing Yue...

Woohoo, the scene where Yunqi was seriously injured and hid in Taixue, and finally lay down on Aying's desk and left, really made me cry! ! ! Yun Qi is really good at everything, he is no less loved than the male protagonist. A Ying likes to eat sweets, and after he learned how to eat sweets, he made a lot of them for her with his own hands. Even if his love for Ah Ying was exploited and provoked by Concubine Zhao, he never turned dark from beginning to end. He was always the handsome young man. Without Concubine Zhao and her mother's family, it would really be unreasonable for Yun Qi and A Ying not to be together. The extra is very interesting. Even if he died, he would not be able to let go of the pale and weak little girl. After all, that smile had been imprinted in his heart from the first time he saw her. Fu Nanqi was also miserable. He was plotted against at a young age, and the favored man was reduced to a street rat. Fortunately, Ah Ying appeared. Fortunately, Ah Ying appeared. The dream of the Imperial Master was not groundless. If it were not for Ah Ying, Fu Nanqi would probably have lived in confusion after slaughtering the palace, or he would have slept with his mother and concubine. Every time I see Yun Qi being rejected by A Ying, I feel heartbroken! Especially at the end! ! ! ! Woo woo woo

I quite liked the male protagonist before, but in the extra chapter, I didn't like him that much. He was so disgusted with his own child, who was still related by blood. It felt so annoying.

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Oh my God, the third prince Fu Yunqi is simply beyond my control. Why doesn't the author arrange a good match for the third prince? The first part is very funny, the second half is very sensational I burst into tears when I saw the third prince find Bai Ying's place on his desk before he died and left there. Bai Ying loves sweets, so the third prince learns to make sweets. It's so sad. If there were no third prince's mother and concubine, I think they would have become I feel sorry for the third prince😭😭😭

After reading it, the progress of the male and female protagonists is a bit slow. The male protagonist is like a devil, a Satan, but he is getting better for the female protagonist. Although he was not very happy, he did not want the heroine to be wronged, so he wronged himself. At first, I didn't really like the heroine's biological mother who appeared later. Before I recognized the heroine, I hated Concubine Jing and the hero and others. I felt that those who were nice to the heroine were trying to steal the heroine. Later, I changed my mind. But what I like the most is the heroine. When she was with the hero, it could be said that everyone around her disagreed, but she did not give up on the hero. I liked what she said the most, "He has no family, and I want to give him a family." The male protagonist loves the female protagonist to the core. There are many people around the female protagonist, but the male protagonist only has the female protagonist.

Pretty good. The writing is witty and humorous. Although there are a lot of complaints, it is still quite attractive, especially when the male and female protagonists get along. It would be better if there were fewer typos and the logical details were more careful. Come on, look forward to more good works

I really don't like the heroine. Xin, who is in his 20s, always does mindless things. He chose to inherit the National Master Tower and acted like she was doing it for the National Master. She is a bit bitch. In the early stage, he felt pitiful for the second prince while at the same time trying to please Fang Zi in every possible way. This was a real double standard. She has her own ideas, but in the end, the people around her are tired and worried. This is really the aura of the heroine, otherwise no one will like her after a long time.

Ah, I'm about to start school. The author is very kind to you. Please update it quickly, otherwise when I come back, I will not be able to remember the previous ones due to my memory and class time.

I like it, but I haven't seen enough. I hope the author will update it soon.