Madam, You Are Spreading Dog Food Again

The writing in the early stages was great, and everyone had a well-developed character. However, in the next few chapters, the ending suddenly came to an end, and the second male lead was suddenly gone. It felt like the author was in a hurry to open up a new pit and ended it in a hurry.

No extras? It feels like the ending is stuck in my throat. It's uncomfortable.

Why do you want to write down the world style to death and have a bad ending?

The end? It just ended when Shifeng died. It felt like an anticlimax. Shifeng wanted to be a general, and why did Shifeng die? What happened after the fifth uncle found Shifeng and helped him return home? Did Momo find him after he left? Did Chujin have any children? Youjin had always said that he wanted to marry Shifeng since he was a child, so why did he suddenly fall in love with someone else?

I have written before about what happened to Li Shifeng after he became a general, but the ending ended with him dying, what the hell?

The ending is unsatisfactory.

This ending is unfinished, right? Why did Shifeng die suddenly, and Youjin had said she wanted to marry Shifeng before, so why did she suddenly change? It feels a bit nonsensical at the end. She laid the groundwork to become a general in the early stage, but died in the later stage? ? Some of the holes were not filled in before it was over...

There are gradually more characters and the story frame has become richer, but the plot does not feel complicated, which is very good.

It's okay, but it's too stained

The ending is too bad, one sentence is dead and it's gone.