Wu Zuntianxia

Personally, I think it's okay. The beginning and the end are pretty good. Although in the end I still wanted You Tianhong's son to continue practicing spiritual practice, I felt pretty good that the author made him an ordinary person. Overall, the content of this book is good, and no corners were cut. It's worth reading.

The plot content is quite good, but the author may have worked too hard on the manuscript, and often made some mistakes. For example, when the protagonist saved Manshan with the Balancing Spirit Pill and woke up, he said that he had broken through the Lingxuan Stage, but later he went to the back mountain to practice and broke through again. I was a little confused after reading it. I hope the author can be more rigorous. Thank you for your hard work~

The writing is not good, many characters and pets have not been written, the little black tiger, even the brother who is as tough as Juemanshan, have not been written later, and the last words of the warrior who entered the cave, it seems that there is a tombstone in the body that says, releasing him in an emergency can save his life. In the end, he won by cheating.

As the heroine, Feng Qingxue has very few scenes🌚🌚

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I feel a bit bored and can't stand it any longer. Please change the book and read it. As a person grows up from a young age, in addition to practicing martial arts, emotions should also play a large role. The lack of emotions is boring!

There were too many typos, and the name of the character in the competition suddenly became the name of the protagonist! Speechless!

After listening to Chapter 30, Yuka keeps targeting the protagonist and his mother. He betrayed his family, gave his skills to hostile forces, and was exploited. The protagonist is like a licking dog going up to save people. Still a little tempted. Isn't it disgusting? Nowadays, so many novels are written like this. It's so disgusting to read. Licking a dog is licking a dog. Such high comments must be given by relatives and friends.

Not pretty!

It was all trash in the beginning.

No matter what the reason is, a family head's son is bullied like this. This family head has no one left.