A Time of Great Power

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There are a lot of comments saying that they can't understand the plot, hahaha. Actually, I think it's quite easy to understand,, (((Maybe it's because I'm more engaged in watching it? And reading literary works with a bit of theology always gives me a subtle feeling~... It's amazing Do you doubt that God's Domain will start a war with Gu soldiers? I want to eat snow lotus from the snowy mountains of God (◦`~´◦) (will it taste like ice cream) (drooling) Also, I like Murong Sesu so much. She is so cute. Is she interested in Fengqing? ₍ᐢ •⌄• ᐢ₎(Why doesn't plmm like me?) (One sister made my heart melt with one mouthful) Feng Qing and Li Mo are really a perfect match. I'm sure of the pineapple cp hhhhhc. The two of them are god-like existences in the eyes of outsiders, but facing each other, it's so sweet that it's so sweet (I just wish there would be less glass slag, the child will cry) (I want to strangle Mo Lian every day) To be honest, at first I thought Mo Lian and Feng Qing were evenly matched. They are both beautiful girls, but they turned out to be full of bad ideas. Oh wow, I saw the wrong person!! It's just a pure white lotus biao555 That Qing Chenna doesn't look like a good guy at first glance, but his eye color is exactly the same as Li Mo's, one blue and one red? Has the strange cp feeling increased? ! (As a side note, I love that kind of morbid beauty) Oh, by the way, the phenomenon of messy text does exist. The author should pay more attention to details~ (problems such as wrong sentences, confusing names, etc.) Come on, come on, come on. It's so awesome (｡>∀<｡) to compare your feelings~

[Suggestions and questions are mainly in the third section, the author is recommended to read them carefully] Just... I could read it passably at first, but then I couldn't understand it at all. It became more and more confusing, and everything came out. If the author wants to write something different from other rebirth novels and want to be unique, that's fine, but if it comes at the expense of a confusing plot, complicated character relationships, and poor writing, then I don't think it's a wise move. Let's talk about writing style. I really want to ask the author, does he only use words such as "deep meaning" and "pressure condensation" to describe the characters? These words are used in some places where these words should not be used, such as "opening with deep meaning", "hiding under pressure condensation...", "Pressure condensation..." These words do not make sense at all, and it is very painful to watch. If the author wants to write seriously, with high quality and high requirements, then please accumulate more vocabulary, at least to ensure that it is not uncomfortable for readers to read, and so that you are not embarrassed to read it, right? Especially the recently updated ones, I feel like they were just trying to make up the number of words when writing them, and I didn't take them seriously at all. The original writing is so bad that it's indescribable. Let's talk about the plot in detail. I used to think this was an ordinary rebirth article. The writing style was neither good nor bad. It was good to read for daily use. But since the author wanted to appear different from other novels, the plot has become particularly confusing. Sometimes it is said that the male protagonist Li Mo loves the female protagonist Feng Qing, and sometimes it is said that the male protagonist actually only wants to use Feng Qing. I read the article carefully and realized that what the author might want to express is that the male protagonist Li Mo loves the female protagonist Feng Qing, but people around him who also love the female protagonist think that the male protagonist just wants to take advantage of the female protagonist. Although I understand it, can the author please carefully review the plot and explain things clearly? Also, later I started writing about the original world, and added a setting: "Li Mo has twins, and only one of them can live." ] Why is it called "hard addition"? Because the author didn't do any foreshadowing at all except "there is a secret of Li Mo in the divine realm" before this, and just added this setting abruptly. The whole thing is getting more and more outrageous. In my opinion, it has deviated from the original track of this book and is heading towards a path that the author is not sure about. It is recommended that the author revise the article and make some preparations at the beginning so that the transition in the following parts is no longer so stiff. I am a reader, and there are only so many suggestions I can give to the author. After all, I am not the author. I hope that my suggestions can be adopted by the author, and I also hope that there will be no die-hard fans who are ignorant/brainless/jealous. Since the author has posted this book on the platform, he needs to accept the objections. The author has the right to write poorly, and the readers also have the right to leave negative reviews.

Personally, I felt it was too confusing. So many people were reborn, and they were all enemies. Why were the vicious female supporting characters in it all targeting the heroine? Shouldn't I just kill Murong Sesu? It made me very confused. Why would I leave it here when I knew it was a hidden danger? It seems that not one of them has died completely yet. The villains have all been reborn with their memories. What the hell? The heroine is surrounded by a bunch of white lotus and green tea. I was also fascinated by the Imperial Master. What exactly is the Imperial Master going to do to resurrect this and that? When I watched the first part, I thought it was okay. But in the second part, I thought it was okay. It feels a bit confusing when there are so many people facing rebirth. Lin Luosheng is quite surprising to me. This person feels so stupid that he has survived for so long and seems to have been resurrected. The plot is a bit annoying, but the author's writing style is still very good, and the plot is also innovative.

Chestnut, keep writing! I like this book very much. I don't read much novels, but I was attracted by the plot and characters of "Power". I don't think the plot is too messy, maybe because I read it more carefully. I admire Lizi very much. The structural mesh is very big. I feel like there are always new surprises. Fengqing and Limo are really sweet. Although there are a few twists and turns, I feel the taste of sweet love. I saw the serialization from the first chapter in a few days and recommended it to many people around me. I like it so much! Although I have never read Gu Yan, I really love Liao. Just like Li Mo is obsessed with Feng Qing, I will also be persistent in being the first in Lizi. Come on~

It feels very chaotic, the relationships between the characters are complicated, and the batch of rebirths is difficult to understand.

It's a good book about palace battles, but the more you write, the more outrageous it becomes, and then it turns into a fantasy? ? ? Mess

I really can't accept that the male protagonist had sex with Mo Lian.

This book is reserved for super smart, extremely intelligent netizens and fans. A book written by a big author (Only the king owns it) pin to top Let me explain the story line of this article: Since it is a rebirth article, there must be a reason for rebirth, so the follow-up is somewhat fantasy-like. The whole article revolves around the soul-changing beads, which are Dzi beads, that can allow people to be reborn. Babies who don't like to watch may feel confused in the double universe in the middle. Let me explain to you that the double universe is similar to the parallel world. The two Li Mo in the parallel world are not the same person. One is Li Mo and the other is Qing Chen.

At first I thought it was a normal rebirth, but in the end, Emma was reborn all the time, more than once. It felt very messy and uncomfortable, so I decided to abandon the article.