The Strongest Apocalyptic Evolution

Chapter 368: As for how Zhang Xinjing could be pregnant for more than two months when she only knew Fang Qingchuan for more than a month, I would like to share some knowledge with you. In the eyes of doctors, the date of pregnancy of an expectant mother is calculated from the time of her last menstrual period. In other words, in the eyes of doctors, the day of a girl's last menstrual period before becoming pregnant is the day she becomes pregnant. So it's normal to have an extra month.

The post-apocalyptic novel that initially got me hooked was "Arena of the End" (unfortunately, the author didn't insist on it and it was unfinished later). Later, I read a lot of apocalyptic novels that still left an impression on me: "Dark Blood Path", "Global Evolution", etc. In "Global Evolution", the protagonist is also a person struggling to survive in the apocalypse. Jiang Yi is not the kind of invincible, not the kind who will kill anyone he sees, not the kind of you are my enemy and you must die, not the kind who will definitely like the protagonist as long as she is a woman (although so far in your novels, Tang Bing, Guo Hanxue, Aya and even Yuan Feier are in the harem) One of the candidates) But none of these are clearly reflected. I don't know how many times this is better than "Dark Summoner of Doomsday". Some people say that the most taboo thing in doomsday novels is the protagonist, the Virgin Mother, but no one gives this Virgin what standard. Is it possible to save a person and say the Virgin? What about Our Lady Jiang Yi? When the people around him are in danger, he can transform into Shura. Some people say: Isn't this the Holy Mother who saves people when his own abilities are limited? You may not even survive to save others. But what I want to say is that this is not a rebirth apocalypse flow. From the beginning, the protagonist is iron-clad and decisive without a growth process, which would be very unrealistic. Just like in "The Rising of the Shield Hero", the protagonist turned black after being deceived, but he also developed tenderness for his men, or his woman. Jiang Yi kills in the convoy to establish an image of protecting others, and saving people makes them understand that he will not kill innocent people indiscriminately. It is impossible for everyone who returned to the base convoy to be treated fairly. At this time, these people will definitely think of Jiang Yi and form a force, so saving people is also a foreshadowing (of course this is just my personal idea). However, some details are still not handled properly. Of course, there must be a gap in everything. This is normal. Overall, this is my favorite post-apocalyptic article. I hope the author will work hard and keep working hard.

I read more than 500 chapters and gave up. The beginning is OK, and the description of the superpowers in the middle is also OK. Later, after killing a fifth-level turtle and entering a village, it is simply watery. It has entered an endless cycle of "low-key, pretentiousness, and brain-dead interaction". It's as if the author changed the outline and suddenly became a primary school student. I'm really speechless. It's anticlimactic (I don't know if this book will be a eunuch).

The details of all the characters are well drawn. I also like Jiang Yi's character very much. In addition, the author's writing style is really great. All the characters are vivid in the author's writing. I hope the author will continue to work hard in the new year to finish this book.

By Chapter 284, I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist maimed a monster, and Tang Bing snatched his head and took away the third-level corpse core. The protagonist had nothing, so he just endured it? ? ? Tang Bing still acts like he is great This book is slow to update, I really can't read it anymore

As an old bookworm, I have read a lot of various types of post-apocalyptic novels. This is the most exciting one I have read. The plot is rigorously conceived, the characters' psychology is clearly described, and the right foreshadowing all shows that the author is serious and careful about this work. He really puts his heart into it. The only thing I feel is lacking is the author's positioning of pig's feet. It's too righteous. From the beginning to now, there is no sentence describing the dark side of Pig's Foot. Come on, an eighteen or nineteen-year-old boy, faced with the sudden apocalypse, the betrayal of his girlfriend, the bullying of his classmates, and then the desperate struggle to obtain superpowers, will his weak heart really not be distorted in the slightest? How can you become a Buddha without becoming a demon? Although there are times when I get angry and kill the enemy, the chain is broken every time at the critical moment, which gives people a sense of suffocation. Facing the difficult situation, it is miserable, but it feels that I have not reached that point at all. There is too little psychological activity in the pig's feet. Every time, I feel that I have fought to the difficult point, and then I have mentioned the latter. For specific details, you can refer to the growth history of Naruto Uzumaki in Naruto. Will this give readers a more sense of immersion? Regarding the improvement of the strength of pig's feet, since it is a game upgrade system, can't there be a plot of opening boxes? Can't it have a lucky attribute? It's simpler to automatically package it after being hacked to death, but it also lacks the sense of anticipation of unboxing and seeing your face! Of course, these are just some personal views and opinions. You ask me to write a book but I can't actually write it. I am just a spectator. I think if these elements are added, the book will be more worth looking forward to. It doesn't matter whether the plot is cliché or not. What is important is that the reader feels happy and the author feels happy when writing it! ! If you agree, push me up.

The plot is too slow, and I can't stop watching it. It was very interesting at first, but as I watched, I felt that the IQs of the male and female protagonists were getting worse and worse. How could Tang Bing be sent out to save people with his mind? Don't be ridiculous, even the third generation of officials are not so stupid. Otherwise, they would have been played to death, and they would never survive past the age of 20. The author must be very young, right? Either they have never experienced the darkness of society and have done their best to eradicate evil. There are several examples of this kind of character in every village in real society. If the protagonist has this kind of thinking in real competition, he will probably die miserably, and everyone in his family and around him will be wiped out. If I were the protagonist, I would have two simple choices: 1. Find an opportunity to kill Dongfang Tian, ​​Gao Wei, Yuan Lin and others. Why didn't Bai Jie say that they should be killed when they were just rescued? The consequence is nothing more than being unable to enter the capital base. Then you can lead a few teammates alone to survive in the wild. Just a few people have small goals and are easy to do, which greatly improves the chance of survival. You can sneak into the base when you are stronger. Moreover, Tang Bing, a idiot like him, will definitely die before he can lead his team to the base. Who knows if he can bring his team members into the base and make things prosperous? 2. If you don't kill them, they will be completely beaten to death by these guys with backends after entering the base. Even if you can't catch yourself and catch the people around you, it's just a trap. As long as the leader is not stupid, the protagonist group will definitely die and there will be no chance of survival. Then there are two very simple choices: live or die? One is just a question, no matter how stupid you are, choose one. Even if one is not so sure, it is very simple. It is equivalent to a 60% possibility of death, and a 99.99999999% Chance of death. If it is a living thing, choose 1. What's more, if both of them are likely to die, there are only two choices: die in the hands of zombie mutants, or die in the hands of despicable and shameless brainiacs, then choose the former. Don't ask me why, because human nature is selfish, and labor and capital are going to die anyway, so of course we should take revenge first if we can. Even if the protagonist didn't react at first, he should have thought of it a few days ago. I am just a second-generation rich man who has never enjoyed life. To be precise, my family encountered big changes not long after I graduated from college and started working. In addition, I have been exposed to too many intrigues since I was a child. If I were like the characters in your book, I would have died long ago. And those second-generation and third-generation officials have seen more of the dark side than me. If I were simple, I would have shot my entire family who was tricked by the older generation. Don't think I've made people's hearts too dark. Do you think those dudes in the news would capsize if they weren't plotted and betrayed by the people around them? Everyone wants to live a good life, but once you enter another level, the ultimate goal of all pretense, all scheming and struggle is: to live well. Don't think you are low-key, you can live a good life without annoying others. It doesn't exist! Just like if you are in the electrical appliance business, you will naturally have many colleagues, no matter how close those colleagues are to you, whether they are friends or relatives. Once you hit a wall, they will poach your customers without hesitation. Because if you fail, your customers will find someone else. It is better to give them to the people around us. As an old Chinese saying goes, good luck should not flow to outsiders. As for if you want them to help you, forget it. There may be people around you who may help you, but don't even think about helping you make a comeback. Who would be so stupid as to be a holy mother and give you their share? Because your existence is an enemy to your peers, and you are an enemy who is fighting for food and food, even if you have never known anyone and never offended anyone. No matter what you do, you need resources to survive. Don't blame others for being cruel, because everyone knows that the market share is so large. If I don't become big, I won't defeat others. If others become big, will they let me go? Even if the big one doesn't target me, just because of his corporate monopoly, my factory will collapse. No one will be at odds with his or her own interests, unless the benefits are not commensurate with the rewards. Officialdom is even darker. There is a saying that if you are not afraid of doing something wrong, you are afraid of being on the wrong team. A person who lives on the outside has no future, and can easily be taken away by someone who commits crimes.

The plot is too long. It's over 800 chapters from the beginning and I'm still on the way to the capital. It's too unreasonable. Even if I climb, I should have climbed there, let alone driving. Isn't there a safe place along the way? I keep fighting all the way. What's more, the protagonist is obviously so strong, but he is always worried about some small villains. He often has to be hurt by some small people before he knows how to fight back. His IQ is worrying!

Some parts of what you wrote are really speechless. If you want to kill a woman like Chen Jiazi, just kill her. She is so whiny and depressed just looking at it.

It's a rare good story. As a post-apocalyptic story, the protagonist is not a virgin. He is ruthless enough to break his hand. He is not the kind of protagonist who pretends to be a pig and eats a tiger. Pretending to be weak is a means, not pretending to be B, not invincible. There is team spirit. The teammates also have their own growth and characteristics. The villain also has a brain, not the kind that is brainless. After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages. The plot develops slowly, so the pace can be speeded up appropriately.