The General's Wife Ran Away Again

The sentences don't make sense, and the dialogue between the male and female protagonists is messy😑

This book is unreadable. There are too many words, too few words, and typos. The names are also wrong. You must have book ethics when writing a book, or you should stop writing. I can't read it, so I decided to give up on it.

At the beginning, it was said that the heroine is a police officer who travels back in time, or faces a crime head-on, but in the end, the slightest bit of emotional pain makes her want to die. Although I feel comforted that the police officer is also a woman and is emotional, the more I watch it, the more disgusting I feel.

The writing is good, but the bad guy has been around for a thousand years. He came out again when he saw that it was about to end. The framework of the article is very clear, and the foreshadowing is also very good. Although there are many characters, they are clear. I jumped into it. I read it during the holiday because I was in school. It is really good. It is sadistic and sweet. It is very attractive when combined. The elements of the article are also quite innovative. To be honest, I saw the protagonist on the verge of death. After death, there is still more than half of the progress bar. I am particularly afraid of jumping to see the story of the next generation. I panic to death, but fortunately, it is not that scary. The character setting of the heroine makes people feel very kind, not too arrogant and not too cowardly. The male protagonist is versatile and rich. If they do not hesitate in love, maybe there will be no such things later. Every decision in life has its consequences. It's a trial, just go through it, just like Gale's prophecy, "There is a man in the cave who wears a mask and is covered in blood and looks like him." It's probably like this. Doesn't everything have results in the end? So don't give up when you encounter difficulties, but sometimes you have to learn to retreat despite difficulties. After all, this is a novel, and it can't be completely reasonable. I don't know if Murong Ya said her identity in the end. But it's really warm and doesn't have too many modern factors. Apart from cosmetics, I really recommend reading it if you have time. Some parts of the article are particularly beautifully worded, but I only remember one line of confession. I'm a little embarrassed, haha. The description of the characters, the control of the scenes, the expression of emotions, and what kind of perspective the author writes from are very well grasped and the organization is very clear and does not make people confused.

There are too many typos, the structure of the whole book is too messy, basically there are bad guys all around, and they come one after another? The heroine is written so kindly. I feel like I deserve to be offended behind my back, and I don't deserve any sympathy at all. So I have no desire to read this book.

It can't be said that Ye Chen doesn't love the heroine, but he is a bit despicable. At first, he just wanted to take advantage of her, which is not pure.

The storyline is colorful and vivid. The only drawback is that there are a lot of typos. Keep up the good work.

I think the author is afraid of masochism

The writing is great, especially when the female protagonist abuses the male protagonist. It's great, I just love watching the female protagonist abuse the male protagonist.

Is the author mentally a little bit... This article is full of abuse, all kinds of abuse, the male and female protagonists should not be together, why are they writing together after a few good days? I am speechless.