Return of the God of War

First of all, the title of the book is inappropriate. Even God of War makes me wonder if the author is not good at Chinese. Does he know the concept of God of War? Take the first 100 chapters as an example. The male protagonist has been manipulated by his opponents since he returned home. He has worries every time he makes a move. Does he not know how to touch his interpersonal relationships or identity? The method of handling the matter is not appropriate at all. It sounds kind at best, but is stupid at worst. It is basically: Zhou Yu hits Huang Gai - one is willing to hit and the other is willing to suffer. It is very stupid, so using the word God of War to describe it is not appropriate at all. Even an ordinary soldier king is not so aggrieved, right? Being led by the heroine all the time. The second is the heroine Qin Momo, who is even more stupid. I remember one chapter, about 100, where she knew that Qin Tianhai and the Lin family and his son were jointly plotting against Liu Mang, but still pretended to know nothing in front of Liu Mang. It was too selfish. She said she loved the hero, but she kept away from him. I even felt that the heroine Qin Momo was a bit cheap. Li Xue could do everything for the hero, but what was the heroine Qin Momo doing? She knows that the male protagonist Liu Mang loves her to the point of madness, but she keeps staying away from him as if she were a bitch. There are many other issues regarding the male and female protagonists. Generally speaking, the characters of the male protagonist and the female protagonist are not well conceived at all. This is the biggest failure. The male protagonist is written like a licking dog. Is it related to the word "God of War"? The female protagonist is too selfish, and they didn't get together until more than 900 chapters. In my opinion, she deserves it even if they can't be together. In addition, there are many shortcomings, a lot of typos, and the organization is not very clear. I couldn't stand it after one or two hundred chapters. It's so disgusting. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is too cruel.

Another one that convinced me. I've watched more than a dozen similar movies and they were all like this. Couldn't you write more carefully? He is the God of War, okay? Why do you look like a licking dog? I really don't know how those people can stand it.

Let me introduce to you a beautiful book that I just finished reading. The name is The Strongest Soldier King Huncho City. The author's name is Chen Peng. I think it's really nice. As for whether you all like to watch it or not, I don't know.

Too many typos

The writing is really rubbish. In the second chapter, when you saw your father being slapped and ignored him, you shed tears first? Are you going to be kicked out again? It's really interesting to write

The author writes very well

It's a bit bloody. I didn't want to watch it when I saw the little witch training on Purgatory Island. I kept looking at the catalog to see the ending of Liu Mang and the little witch. It was really too bloody.

Is it possible to fight like this? ? It's really brave and reckless. It's obviously wrong to use public power for private purposes, but the male protagonist is beaten without explanation. It seems that the male protagonist is a dangerous person. The police in the army are just and they only know how to beat? Nothing can be corrected. I can't stand it after reading Chapter 17. There are too many flaws. Why did it have to be corrected with so many words? It is not easy for the author, but if the work is nothing, then why are you writing it? Writing ten novels with tens of thousands of words is not as good as writing one high-quality novel. Calm down yourself and won't give negative reviews. I really beg the author to treat literary creation well. Don't write so many mindless articles, with no plot, unclear characters and incoherence, digging too many holes and thinking that the story network is getting wider and wider. In fact, it is all on the surface, and it is boring to read it just for fun. Calm down and create well. Good works will be supported by many people, but if you only focus on the number of words and do not guarantee quantity but not quality, it will be difficult to succeed. Even if it is for your hard work, please take it seriously and create well.

There are many typos, contradictory content, and slow updates.

Not pretty at all.