Peerless Mad Soldier

I didn't want to comment at first, but author, are you unsure about what you're writing? Write what comes to mind? After a while, Li Yefeng took a nude photo of Bai Wudie. Bai Wudie hated him. Later, he took the initiative to pursue Li Yefeng. A while later, Bai Wudie hated him. The Dragon King challenged Yu Jianxian after more than 500 moves. Later, Long Yan said that Mr. Luo saw the Dragon King defeat Yu Jianxian and asked the secret king to challenge Yu Jianxian. He also said that Li Tiannan failed to get in the front door of Ye's house when he challenged him. Later, he said that Li Tiannan was one of the seven dragons in the south. He was about the same strength as Huangfu Hongjun, and he was about the same as Huangfu Hongjun. He couldn't even get in through the front door of Ye's house? Still being hunted by the Ye family? The strongest mad swordsman of the Ye family was suppressed by Huangfu Hongjun. Why couldn't Li Tiannan even defeat the Ye family? Still being hunted? If you don't have a structure when writing a book, don't bother yourself with so many rankings of strengths. You'll be confused by writing over and over again, right? Don't even know who is strong and who is weak? It's just a mess. Don't dig a hole and fill it up. At least you can't dig it bigger and bigger and bury yourself in it, right? Instead of wasting my few days and reading more than 200 chapters, I really don't want to waste my time reading it. Damn it, now I have to read it. After reading so much, I can only say that this is the most rubbish novel I have ever read. The relationship between the characters is unclear. You still have to spread the scene in such a big way. There is a noble family in the east and a noble family in the west. Do you think you don't know what you are writing about? Unbridled imagination is a writing technique, but at least you have a framework first, a text structure, right? Instead of just writing down what comes to mind, you can't figure out how many levels of powerful characters you have conceived after just writing 200 chapters. It's a complete mess and has no merit. Bad review.

The plot is a bit heart-wrenching. From the beginning, it was shown that the male protagonist has a strong background and skills, but the subsequent development is disappointing. People around him, those close to him, and those he wants to protect are hurt in various ways, but he has not been able to successfully protect him. Every time he was injured to the point of death, he would get angry and retaliate harshly. Facing everyone, the most common thing is his indifference. I don't know if he wrote this to set off his own strong strength. He is controlled by others in every aspect, and it is difficult for him to beat four hands with two fists. When solving a problem, there is always a fire in the rear. It's frustrating to watch.

To be honest, I have never read such a frustrating novel. I endured reading dozens of chapters just to give him a bad review, so I registered an account. I hope everyone can learn from it.

The novel is not selling, so give Qimao some advice! Do I need to exit when viewing other applications while reading? The original back button of the phone is completely blocked! If you want to avatar while reading aloud, you must exit, which is very troublesome! It is recommended that Qimao improve, remove the lower eyebrow advertisement or put it somewhere else!

It's really good. I can't forget the name Li Yefeng.

Is this simply written about Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles? It has reached the extreme level of personal insult. I can still tolerate it and let it go easily. What the hell is this writing? Not arrogant at all

Generally, don't use the word crazy. It's inappropriate.

The names of a group of urban masters who fight against each other are considered to be cultivators. Look at the strongest mad soldiers in Lieyan next door. They are all from the city, and their fights are all ancient martial arts. There's nothing to write down, is there? Write and write and go to heaven.

After reading it for a while, it didn't look good. It made the owner look like a loser. He didn't even have the blood type of a soldier, so he was a loser.

It would be great if you could write a few more pictures of Li Qingxue and Ye Xiaoxi serving the same husband. I would like to see this.