Pick up Leaks

Picking up the leaks and traveling through time, but also cultivating immortality in an empty space. . ? The routine is too deep, me. . Don't understand If you write about traveling back to the Republic of China, redeeming historical regrets, or even giving some fake ones to foreign countries, you will be happy to read them.

I can still read what I wrote in the early stage, but I don't know if I typed it wrong or was lazy in writing it. The more I read it, the less I want to read it.

The subsequent cultivation of immortality is simply baffling and I can't stand it anymore.

Beware of that golden peak

The first part is okay, but the later part is more interesting - the protagonist travels through time and goes to cultivate immortality. I won't delete the book, I just want to see if the protagonist has traveled back in time.

Just looking at it makes people tired of looking at it, can you believe it?

The early stage is very good, but in the later stage, time travel and time travel again, and no psychological changes are written in the middle. It seems that the lives of three people have a parallel relationship, and the main line of the article is not clear.

What did you write and how did you get the rating?

Where's the protagonist's aura! Why am I not confident at all? I don't see that there is any brain, no hatred, and calmness. Wit is irrelevant. All that's left is bravery, with a half-dead mother. It also makes the protagonist and the protagonist be restrained at every turn. Afraid of wolves before and tigers behind. Is this the gap between the protagonists that the author wrote about? ? ? ? ?

It's just a mess