The Best Son-In-Law Who Cultivates Immortality

This ending is too hasty. Many of the foreshadowings have not been completed, nor have they gotten married. What happened to the other girls, and they did not go to the Nine Heavens to find the White Emperor and the Qing Emperor. I don't know who his master is. The early stage is quite interesting and the later stage is boring. Finally, the Nether Chapter is finally over, and the whole book is finished. However, it was so hard to write, so I still give it a good review.

First, bullshit, typos, confusing names, etc. Second, the rise and fall of cultivation is better than the elevator. Third, is it so difficult to choose a name? You've been sleeping for months and still can't figure out a name? Fourth, who is the master talking about, what is the outcome of the other girls, so many foreshadowings, none of them are completed, and it ends hastily.

The structure of the game is complete. It was quite enjoyable to watch the various enemies at the beginning, but after watching too much, I became tired and the later stages were boring.

I also taught my brother-in-law that filial piety should come first and what good qualities are needed to practice martial arts, but what happened to me? You pretend to be cool with everyone. The little nurse is kind enough to give you an infusion, but you tell them to get lost. The dean of the hospital politely invites you to dinner. You keep pretending to be cool.

The content of the book is good, but I can only say that if the book has 100,000 words, then there are 600,000 words of nonsense, especially if the phone ringtones are written in words and placed in the book. If you make a few more phone calls, the book can add tens of thousands of words. The words in the entire book are basically names of people and phone ringtones.

You've been having sex for several months and you still call her a woman in red, orange, yellow, green, blue, purple, don't you know how to name her?

I like this name, it's crazy

Somewhat brainless

Every protagonist is a playboy. You can really guess what will happen after you see the beginning. None of them are dedicated. It makes people tired of watching them.

It would be nice if there was no follow-up to this series and there was a second season.