I Open a Bathroom in Heaven

Because I was writing in a hurry, there are many shortcomings in it, I know that. I'm also willing to accept criticism. If readers don't like it, just don't use curse words. If there are too many typos or the sentences don't make sense, you are welcome to point them out. . The last point, and the most important point, is that readers, can you watch it more slowly, and let the 30-second circle above go around a few more times? I estimate that I can get a contribution fee of 0.01 Points. . Please let me know if you add up to a little. Welcome to pin.

The plot is very exciting, and I have a lot of expectations. I especially like the heroine. Everything is good, but there are too few updates. Four or five chapters a day are not enough. When did the author break out and update dozens of chapters a day?

Although I haven't read this book yet, but seeing that the author has such a good temper and responds to every comment, plus everyone's book reviews, I think this book has attracted me even before I read it😏😏😏

The author has a few typos in the book, which I hope can be corrected, and some punctuation marks that I hope can be corrected. I think the content is quite good.

What kind of spicy novel is this? The more I read it, the more addictive it becomes. I originally went to bed around one o'clock, but now I can stay up until six o'clock. The update is too slow, please update it quickly! ! ! ! Update me to si! (I'm just kidding, the author needs to take a good rest~)

The author's works are not very rigorous. For example, at the beginning, the gold merchant wants to marry the daughter of the richest man in the provincial capital, and then plans to transfer his assets to escape. There is no logic at all. Let's not talk about the richest man in the provincial capital, who is worth at least tens of billions, and how strong the relationship is in all aspects. The gold merchant you wrote about has a bigger industry than the heroine, and can suppress the heroine in all aspects. Would such a big boss do such a childish thing just to help his son pick up girls and take revenge? They also transferred assets. Those tycoons would never do such irrational things out of revenge. How big of a revenge would that be? Unless it involves one's own life and death, I have no choice but to do what you wrote. You write about human nature too simply, and it feels like a child's play house. I suggest the author read more books in this area, such as how much worth and power those rich people have, which will make it more enjoyable for readers. There is also a cultivation system. Since the upper limit is written so high, then there must be some masters and masters around those rich people. Let's not talk about it for the moment, at least it should be about achieving great inner strength and consummation. Don't underestimate the desire for money. Those who are successful in cultivation also have desires, emotions and desires, and they also need money. Like the tycoon you wrote about who is worth billions or even tens of billions, but there is not even a master of inner strength around him. It feels like child's play. I suggest the author write more about human nature, and don't make the male protagonist too licky. After all, more than 90% of your readers are They are all male, and it is necessary to write in a cold style, especially in the bath. Since others cannot see through his cultivation and treat him as a great god, the male protagonist has to pretend to be that way, instead of calling this general a brother and that general a brother. At least a sense of mystery must be maintained. The author is also suggested to write more plots in which the male protagonist pretends to be a pig and eats a tiger. After all, most readers now like this kind of plot, such as encountering a certain rich man. A dandy, pretending to be the hero in public, and then the hero gets to know someone over the phone, and finally the dandy father personally apologizes and gives gifts, or directly makes a feud, and then finds out the illegal things the dude family has done, and finally destroys it. And if you write these things, the story lines will be more, and the content will not be monotonous. Most importantly, readers will also like to read it. Finally, I will give a neutral review. I hope the author will work hard and the content will become more and more mature.

The author is very scheming. The more you let us scold you, most people will do the opposite and stop scolding you. But I don't take the ordinary path. I am an obedient group.

The title of Chapter 614 is wrong! Cup? It should be a chess piece!

Good review, because the author's beginning is different from others, you are the inheritance, others are the dumpers

It's so fake. Wouldn't he have been caught with so much gold in real life? There are so many people who have seen it,