Jiuyang Martial God

Hello everyone! I am the author of this book. Comments are welcome!

It's really, really good-looking, with a tight rhythm and no sloppiness. The protagonist kills when he should, but retreats when he doesn't want to. The main line of the general cultivation novel is very single, and it can't beat upgrading and annihilating the clan. However, the main line of this book is very wide, and there is no single boring. Although the updates are very slow, there are never any loopholes in Zhang Yuzhang's story, and Zhang Zhang's stories are very exciting to watch. If the author could write at least five chapters a day, this book would be no worse than A Perfect World!

Author, I'm in my early twenties this year, and I can't complain at your speed. I don't force it, I just hope that I can see the ending in my lifetime. I just hope that Ye Yunfei can talk about the relationship between his children later (it's better not to talk about it), because all women will betray in the end and go to dominate the world with his younger brother.

I really like this book. It is exciting and enjoyable to read. The main characters in the book are upright, kind, and superb in martial arts. Ye Yunfei is full of the qualities of the Emperor of Heaven. I hope it will be updated soon!

What does this write? In order to earn money for adding more chapters, a good idea led you to write loosely and nonsense. You made money here, but you lost a successful work. A failure can never lead to a great success.

So far, I think this book is okay, but then I read so many fantasy novels, and the fighting plot in this book is better. I just think it makes people feel very excited, as if you want to participate. Well, can I make some suggestions here? This plot can be a little more twisty and give the protagonist a little hardship, which can make the plot more exciting. I hope the author can take a look at my suggestions. Thank you.

This author has a lot of confusion in his head. In the first few chapters, he said that breaking through the Five Mirrors of the Cave Sky can defeat Xiao Xuan Dan and clean up the middle stage of Xiao Xuan Dan. He can fight with Xiao Xuan Dan in the later stage. Later, he said that he can fight with Xiao Xuan Dan and draw a few moves, but he can fight with Xiao Xuan Dan in the middle stage. I wrote about the combat power without understanding anything.

It looked okay at first, the writing is good , especially the part about saving the family, but it becomes boring later on. The plot routines are the same and there is nothing to watch. The enemies come one after another. As soon as he becomes the top person here, the higher level ones come. Shuangwen is not the same. He can't pretend. Everyone is jealous of his things. Then he just robs and threatens. If he can't beat him, he escapes and sends him away. A little experience is enough. I always have countless treasures in heaven and earth, but I can't do anything with them. I can't describe my love clearly. I like the heroine out of nowhere. How much do I care about you? The villain is also brainless. The protagonist is also pretending to be smart. He always mentions his previous achievements and mentions how powerful the emperor was in the past, but you are not now, etc... In short, he is just pretending.

Hello, author: write more about Qing Luo's emotional line or go to the small world to experience together. Although there is a reason why he died for Ye Yunfei in his previous life, it still feels too dry. It feels like Ye Yunfei repaying favor to Su Qingluo. Seeing now, I can feel that Qing Luo loves Ye Yunfei, but I don't feel how much Ye Yunfei loves Qing Luo. Although he will save his friends when they are caught, it will be the same when his family members are arrested. It does not reflect the specialness of a lover. The fighting aspects are pretty good and the storyline is not repetitive. It's quite interesting. Take your time and come on.

To be honest, this kind of novel is unappetizing. It is insulted, slapped in the face, and then insulted and slapped again. You can come up with tricks even when you poop, and the protagonist must not do things the same as others. First let people scold you, and then show it.