Rebirth of the Urban Immortal

The author seems to have no sense of time and his common sense is confused. First, he can still go to school normally after being missing for a year. Second, the mayor was corrupt and was arrested on the same day he reported it. He was sentenced by the court at dawn the next day and appeared on TV. Third, I have been practicing all day, and the birthday party the day before was not over yet! I just watched the beginning and couldn't stand it anymore, ugh!

What a rubbish book. It's just that you can't clearly write down the concept of time! The male protagonist and the female lead are both together, and they are all in love with each other, but later in the introduction, they don't have much interaction with each other! Can such an author write a book? Can such unorganized works be put on the shelves? He was tortured before he became an immortal, and his family had no money for medical treatment. Later, it was actually introduced that Pig's Foot competed with the Car God before he became an immortal and he even won! Where did the money come from? Where did the car come from? Junk books waste time!

The cauldron plan at the beginning was not mentioned at all in the subsequent paragraphs of the article. Moreover, it was clear that she had a relationship with Jiang Feifei before, but later she said that she did not recognize the same thing, and she was raised by her godparents. So what the hell is going on? The article is illogical, the language is contradictory, and the realms are confused. All immortal cultivators have become cabbage, are they everywhere? ? ? Hehe! ! !

This is a rubbish book. You haven't even gone through Qi training yet, and you jumped to the level of Immortal Lord. Ordinary warriors are also Immortal Lords. You treat the Immortal like a cabbage! The ground is full of immortals! Abandon the book decisively!

The thinking mode is too confusing, and I will jump from the golden elixir to the tribulation in one jump.

Is there a next one?

I want to say that even if Ye Xuan is strong, it is not necessary for every girl to like him. Every time he goes to a place, he meets a girl who admires Ye Xuan, and then there happens to be another girl next to him who likes that girl. Then he is dissatisfied with Ye Xuan, and Ye Xuan pretends to be cool and slaps him in the face. This is how he always captures the heart of a girl.

Very nice, I hope there will be a 2nd part

To be honest, this book is a bit discriminatory against women. Although I am a man, I hate the kind of men who don't recognize others when they pull up their pants. They also treat women as cultivation tools and are not responsible for breaking other people's virginity. I am speechless.

This book makes me feel sick.