Martial Arts Become a God

I think this novel lacks too many details. The battle between the two is well written but there are not many details. I recommend everyone to read Self-Esteem God and Demon. There are really many details in this novel, and the battle process is also very exciting. It is a good novel. I really hope the author can add more details, so that it will be easier to attract people's attention.

The main plot is good,,,, but some details are not explained clearly. What is Han Ling'er's life experience? How did Georgie come back from the dead twice? How many ancient tribes are there? Which tribe is Qin Susu from? How did Xiao En become a seed? How did the girl from the Ghost Clan come out? Where is the dean of Taichu Academy? (He disappeared and the ending did not come out)? Doesn't Nora Nami count as the hero's woman? The only one who helped the male protagonist in Tie Tu City went to Taichu Academy, and there was no explanation for the others? Who are the powerful men who appeared with Mo Hong? What happened in the end? What happened to the two meteorite fragments? What happened after using it? Where did the meteorite fragments come from? After the one-armed man was taken away by the crocodile, did he explain who was behind him? Except for the water unicorn, where have all the other unicorns gone? Where did Shui Qilin go when Taihuang Palace was destroyed? What kind of knight puppet was destroyed and not repaired? What happened to Yan in the end? What happened to Long Xing in the end? After those memory spots were digested, only one martial skill appeared? Was the battle mentioned at the beginning the battle with Mo Hong? So besides the Ghost Clan, which other clans are on the losing side? Who put that mark into the male protagonist's body? Is it ambiguous whether the tower was finally repaired or not? What did you say you did to repair the last few layers? What happened to Shang Feng and Hong Ling? Did the Hailing tribe finally integrate into the Kong family or what? Is Kong Ling's father awake? Wait, wait, wait, these are not explained clearly! This book made me angry and funny. The big fish eats the small fish, and there is a tribal conflict? To say that it is a combination of Lin Dong and Xiao Yan is an insult to these two novels, which have no depth at all. The author's idea at the beginning was good, but the further he wrote, the more he felt exhausted. The first time I read a novel, I was both angry and funny. I hope the author can read more books by other authors (such as Tiancan Tudou) to see if they can improve the details. I originally thought there would be surprises later, but ended up skipping it. I was speechless!

Isn't it Douluo's routine?

I just didn't want to read it anymore, the more I wrote, the worse it got.

How many wives does the hero have?

Lots of typos

Shen Teng actually asked for a beating like this. If Shen Teng saw it in real life, he would be furious 😂

The writing is really rubbish, there are really many typos, and the sentences are not good. What happened almost immediately? Haha, they are all anecdotes, and the writing is not good at all. You should read more about other people's fairy tale novels.

The author may be a young person with a superficial understanding of emotions, which makes the protagonist look like a playboy who has no bottom line when he sees a beautiful woman. For example, Qiaoqiao still treats her like this after he has been trapped for a day. If Qiaoqiao is an ugly girl, he will still do this. There are many such examples!

Can the male protagonist be more focused? . . . When you meet a pretty girl, do you fall in love with her? ? This routine is really speechless.